Child Neglecter

Denied.

One sullen, haunted soldier approves - withdrawing his flask, so that he may raise it to the skies - scowling at the rising sun.

"An ember, reignited. These ones will learn soon enough the value of war, of the blade."

E

my gif got deleted

return to monke

Trendsetter. I expect a long list of buyers after me.

Discord: sam.#3406

Skin: Shiny Armour Tings.

Bid: 50 minas. I'm also qualified to help you with your toothache.

my name is Mordhaund and this is my favourite kha CA of all time 

DEMON LOVER 1 and his folk will join.

A soldier, eyes full of sullenness, grave haunting, and prophetic madness, grumbled at the sight of the Crusade - silently pocketing it, as a pale hand raised to his lips so as he might cough, expending the contents of his throat - lifting fist to the grey skies.

"They will it. The GOD, perhaps neij. There will be bodies to bury; this, I know.  Aesh Dea."

23 minutes ago, ImCookiie said:

This is a great idea. However, the red-lines aren't extensive enough in comparison to the rewards from this potion, in my opinion. How will the aftermath be moderated, in regards to powergaming? 

Redlines are like 87 words. If you want an actual alchemy addition, have the mind to format it properly and write the redlines properly. Seems like it's a neat concept but you haven't thought it out well enough for it to really get a forum post. Why would you make a thread and apply when you haven't actually thought it out much at all? Clearly the fact that you had to add a redline for clarification and you're yet to actually clarify what would happen if you drink it again after those 5 years means that it isn't well thought out enough yet.

I'd personally suggest selfdenying this 1 and coming back once you've got it all thought out and have a proper answer to every question that anyone will throw you way. Offering an extension of life is a huge alchemical breakthrough, where previously the only ways of achieving such were twisted, complicated features that couldn't be put in a bottle. The name makes it clear enough; it's life in a bottle, and yet the fact that the lore is written so simply and doesn't have much clarification at all on anything, nor proper redlines, clearly means it needs much more work before there's even an inkling of a chance of it being accepted.

Is this able to be infinitely stacked? I sure hope not.

exquisite

cameronpilled

N/A, ignore. 

RP Name: Alaric de Salve
MC Name: Mordhaund
Voted: Yep.

yeah alright i'll sign up build looks sick and i'm not sure if the title's ironically or unironically arabic

danny back with the spice

alaric aep solomon

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Excellent. 

the pain begins

i expected a full encyclopedia of stands 

i am not disappointed

go on, then

Name: Alaric de Salve
IGN: Mordhaund

Voted: Yes