Riftblade

Denied.

- Please avoid the cliche of parents being killed by something, in this case it would be orcs in particular.

- Use information from the server lore, the wiki is a great source to use

- Use references to Wood Elven lore in particular

- For interesting facts, mention details about his personality, his strengths and his weaknesses

- Explain why he is good at what he's good at.

You may reapply in 6 hours.

Pending.

- Please use more information from the server lore, your persona would also have been born in Axios judging by their age.

- The Ice Wall was something discovered only in Atlas, explain why your persona's parents wanted to move there?

- Explain more in depth as to why your persona and her parents live or lived out in cold/frozen regions.

- Explain why your persona decided to leave her parents.

- For interesting facts, add more personality traits and flaws, along with hobbies.

- Overall, more detail is always nice.

You will have 24 hours to make the needed edits. If you have questions, feel free to send me a message.

Pending.

- Please use more information from the server lore, there are quiet a good amount of references to Dark Elven that you can use.

- Explain more in depth as to why your persona wishes to leave their village as Elves of all sub-races are considered adults at 50, also clarify what town this is. Perhaps Ker'nor?

- For interesting facts, include some personality traits and flaws, maybe even hobbies.

You will have 24 hours to make the needed edits. If you have questions. feel free to ask me them.

Under review.

Under review.

Under review.

Denied.

- Your persona may not be born with magic or know it beforehand, it must acquired through roleplay on the server and have an approved application for it.

- Please avoid the cliche My parents were killed by (insert group of people here), be original.

- Humans usually cannot have white hair unless it is due to aging.

- Use information from the server lore, the wiki is a great source to use.

You may reapply in six hours.

Accepted! You will be whitelisted soon.

Denied.

- Please use information from the server lore, the wiki is a great source to use.

- Avoid the cliche of your parent (s) being murdered in front of you.

- More detail, backstory, other information about your character is needed.

- Where did they grow up?

- Explain why they are good at what they do?

You may reapply after six hours have passed.

Denied.

- Please use information from the server lore, the wiki is a great source to use.

- More detail, backstory, other information about your character is needed.

- Where did they grow up?

- Explain why they are good at what they do?

You may reapply after six hours have passed.

Under review.

Under review.

Under review.

Denied.

- You have been told to reapply in six hours since your previous application.

- More detail, more references and information from the server lore.

- Your persona could not return to the Uzg without being a whitewash and being killed on sight as he had decided to become a nomad.

You may reapply in six hours. Once six hours have passed, you may reapply.

Under review.

Under review.

Denied. 

- You have been told to reapply in 6 hours since your previous application. Wait out this time and revise your application.

- You still lack a sufficient amount of lore related information in your application.

- If your goblin left the Orcish capital to be a nomad, he'd be deemed a whitewash which means most orcs, including his parents, would attempt to kill him on sight.

- More detail, why did he wish to be a nomad? Why does he love shiny and precious objects so much? Again, more detail.

You may reapply in six hours, follow it through this time.

Under review.

Denied.

- Include information from server lore, the wiki is a fantastic source to use for this

- Where did she settle down?

- What motives did her aunt have to be cruel and strict?

- Interesting facts are asking about your character, not exactly about you in the real world

You may reapply in 6 hours. Please take this time to come up with more ideas, add more information, and do message me if you have specific questions.

Denied.

- Add references from the lore

- Airships do not exist

- Runes and magical artifacts must be acquired in game, not out of character

- What race were his adoptive parents?

- Where was this town located?

- Why is he good at manufacturing weapons? Explain.

You may reapply in 6 hours.

Under review.

Denied.

- Please avoid the cliche of parents being killed by bandits, thieves, etc.

- Please refer to the current lore, the wiki is a great source to use for this.

- Goblins are part of the orc race, who often are rather aggressive and tend to organize raids often. Why were the parents peaceful traders?

- More detail is always nice

You may reapply in 6 hours.

Under review.

Denied.

- Revise your definition for Metagaming, PG, and RP

- Your persona information is severely lacking, add some background, the wiki is a great source

- Your character description is not asking about you, it is asking about your character

- For your interesting facts, those aren't exactly interesting, tell us if they have some sort of quirk or a habit for example

- Character name, not your username

You may reapply in 6 hours.

Denied.

- Please include information from the lore, the wiki is a great source for that

- Does he have any sort of family?

- How did he become a servant?

- Why does he have a fondness for animals?

- How tall in feet and inches, or maybe meters?

- More detail and more information is always great, add more to your character information and interesting facts

- Do revise and improve your definition for PG, RP, and metagaming

You may reapply in 3 hours.

Pending.

Denied.

- Your username is not your persona name

- You are severely lacking in terms of character information

- You don't have very many interesting points and they are lacking in detail as well

- Your skin does not fit the theme of the server

You may reapply in 6 hours.