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Riftblade

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  1. Pending.

     

    - Try explaining why your persona dislikes religion, did he have a bad experience with it when he was younger or does he see a flaw in it? 

    - Try avoiding the mysterious or odd disappearance of your family, try thinking outside the box perhaps.

    - Add more to your strengths and weaknesses, for example: what personality flaws does your persona have? Fears maybe?

     

    Please send me a message once you've made edits or have any questions!

  2. Pending!

     

    Your application has been put on pending for the following reasons:

    - Please try and use something other than my parents were killed by bandits, try and be more original if you can

    - Try and add more for strengths and weaknesses, does your persona have strengths in their personality or any flaws?

    - Tell us more about his ambitions, why does Alfred want to be famous? How famous does he want to be?

     

    Please send me a message once you've made the edits or have questions regarding either your application or the server and I'll gladly try and help!

  3. Pending!

     

    For the following reasons your application has been put on pending:

     

    -Your persona cannot be Ascended! They may however become an Ascended in game through the required roleplay and applications

    -Since your persona is twenty years old, they could not have been born in Aegis especially if they were a human.

    -Please add more specifics to your biography such as cities which can be found in Axios (assuming you keep your personas age as 20)

     

    Please make the needed changes, contact me once you've made the edits or have questions and I'll gladly try to help!

     

  4. Denied.

     

    Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

    - Your timezone doesn't exactly make sense

    - Your definitions for powergaming and metagaming aren't correct

    - The server has yet to reach the year 1920 in roleplay

    - Your biography is rather lacking and doesn't meet the requirements of at least two paragraphs

    - Magic cannot be a strength or talent, that is something you need to find or acquire in game

    - Your strengths and weaknesses are lacking in detail

    - Due to certain reasoning, it is assumed your age is incorrect and that you may be under the age of thirteen 

     

    If you disagree with any of these reasons or have any questions, please do feel free to let me know and I'll gladly try and help!

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