Riftblade

Pending. - Please add more overall information to your persona, add a few more personal incidents or important events in their life. - Try and add more information from the server lore if you can, there's several sources on the forums and on the wiki as well - What exactly are the Souther Brigades? Explain? - For interesting facts, add personality traits, some good traits and some bad traits. You have 24 hours to make the needed edits. If you have questions, please do message me for that or if you have made the edits.

Changed Status to Under Review

Changed Status to Under Review

Under review.

Under review.

Changed Status to Accepted

Accepted. You will be whitelisted soon enough, Welcome to LoTC!

Changed Status to Denied

Denied. You may reapply in 6 hours.

Changed Status to Denied

Denied. - Avoid the cliche of orcs or something else murdering a persona's entire village - Avoid using a settlement or region that does not actually exist in the server lore - Please use information that can be found within the server lore, the wiki is a good source to use for this You may reapply in 6 hours.

Changed Status to Under Review

Under review.

No problem, you still have time to make edits based on the needed edits.

Accepted. Player will be whitelisted shortly.

Pending. - Avoid using word for word information from the wiki as this can be seen as plagiarism, this information also isn't something that always will be known in roleplay. - There isn't really ancient elven, there is normal elven however most of the words have been lost to the past. I'd advise to sticking to your more basic phrases, words, and such. -Why Linandria? Ker'nor may be a better location for a Dark Elf to be born. - Explain more in depth as to why your persona is good at what they are good at. - For interesting facts, explain more in detail how your persona injured their right shoulder and how they lost their ability to see in one eye. - I recommend changing the part about having excellent hearing since it seems a bit much to learn skilled healing through simply eavesdropping - Add more detail and information if you can. You will have 24 hours to make the needed edits. If you have questions. feel free to message me or contact me.

Changed Status to Pending

Pending, please make the following edits. - Add some more detail to your persona's background and more information if you can. - For interesting traits, explain why your persona doesn't get along with Elves, along with adding more personality traits and flaws. You will have 24 hours to make the needed edits. Feel free to contact me if you have questions.

Under review.

Accepted. You will be whitelisted shortly.

"dangerous races like Orc's and Trolls"

That's fine, just a few more things. - There really isn't the Artic in LoTC. - I suggest replacing trolls with Ologs. - Just add some more information and detail if you can.

Pending. - Please use more information from the server lore if you can. - Explain more in depth as to why your persona is good at what they are good at. - For interesting facts, include some personality traits and flaws, maybe even hobbies. - Add more detail and information, tell me more about your persona's background and what they're like. You will have 24 hours to make the needed edits. If you have questions. feel free to message me or contact me.

Under review.

Under review.