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TheIchorDruid

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  1. Changed Status to Under Review

    Application Pending!

     

    Please assure the following changes have been made before we can whitelist you upon our server:

     

    -Your powegaming and metagaming definitions are incorrect.

    -Please make your character's biography flow, right now some parts of it need to be checked for grammar and spelling mistakes.

    -Please go into more detail about your character's description. 

     

    You have 24 hours to make these changes, failure to do so will result with a denial. Please contact me upon the forums once these changes have been made or if you have any questions and queries. 

  2. Changes still need to be made:

     

    -Your character's race cannot be changed using experiments, please stick to one race and not fluctuate between human and High Elf.

    -His eye cannot glow whilst in combat.

    -Please include his weakness and how they affected him rather than just listing his strengths. 

    -You must still include at least one piece of server lore, this could be where he was born which already currently exists or that once existed within our server's lore.

     

    Eight hours remain for these changes to be made! Please contact me once you have made the necessary changes. 

  3. Changed Status to Under Review

    Application pending! 

     Please assure the following changes have been made before I can whitelist you upon our server:

     

    -Your metagaming definition is slightly wrong, please correct this.

    -You must include at least one piece of server lore within your character biography - E.g A place that has existed or currently exists on our server and its history. 

    - Please include a more clear image of your skin, as the one your provided is slightly too far.

    -Your character cannot wield magic, you can begin to learn magic by finding a teacher upon the server once you are whitelisted.

    -Your Wood Elf cannot have black eyes, it has to stick to the racial looks that are stated within our lore.

     

     

    You have 24 hours to make the following changes, once you have done so please comment on the thread or message me upon the forums. Or feel free to contact me if you have any questions or queries. 

  4. Application Pending!

     

    This means there are changes that must be made before you become whitelisted upon our server:

     

    -You must remember to style your character to the demands to the server expectations.  You cannot begin your character with any form of magic as you will be able to begin to go through lessons upon the server. 

    -Your character cannot obtain a 'ultimate sword' that causes destruction upon a mountain. Please and try make your character more simple and standard. It does not make sense for two souls to be obtained in one body.

    -Please correct your powergaming definition.

    -His eye cannot glow when he uses magic, as he should not be able to wield magic just yet. 

    -When your character dies, he cannot become stronger as it defies all standards of death upon our server. One cannot simply become stronger nor weaker when death comes. 

    -When it comes to your character description, this means to describe his physical attributes - hair colour, eye colour etc. 

    -Your character name is not a logical name, names should be things such as 'Michael, John, Grace' Simple names.

    -Your biography must include at least one piece of server lore. 

     

    You have 24 hours to make the following changes, please contact me upon the forums when you have made these changes. If you do not make these changes before the given time then it will be denied. Feel free to contact me should you have any questions or queries!

  5. Application pending.

     

    Please assure the following are done in order to be accepted:

     

    -Please check your spelling and punctuation.

    -Avoid plagiarising descriptions from google. 

    -Please write about your character, rather than explaining what the race is. You could include where they were born, who are their family, what are their personality traits? Etc

    -Please correct your powergaming definition.  

    -When writing your character description please remember to include at least one piece of server lore. 

    Please make your interesting facts more unique and specific to your character.

    -Your character description is used to explain the physical attributes of your character, not explaining the race.

     

    You have 24 hours to make the following changes, please message me upon the forums once you have made these changes or if you have any questions / queries. 

  6. Changes still need to be made:

     

    Your biography does not flow, you do not need to put '(Registered Mentor)' when you mention looking for a mage mentor. Your biography should flow like this: "Grace is a rather lonesome girl whom finds befriending people quite the challenge, her birth place of Linandria did not help her case of finding lasting friendships due to her rather odd behavior. Though through her unique attributes, she found her time being well spent on studying literature" This is an example of how your biography should flow.

     

    -Your metagaming definition is still incorrect.

     

    Your time of 24 hours still remains.

  7. Application Pending!

     

    -You must go through clerical training upon the server before you can be a cleric, please remove this aspect from your application.

    -Please use places that actually existed upon the server, Normandor is not a lore place.

    -You must include at least one piece of server lore within your character biography.

    -Include more detail of your character description - eye colour etc.

    -Your skin does not fit the description of a wood elf - as they are much more tanned, your clothes are also quite modern for the style of the server.

     

    You have 24 hours to make these changes, please message me upon the forums when these changes have been made or if you require any further help!

  8. Application Pending!

     

    Please make sure the following changes are made:

     

    -Your character age does not fit in with where you once lived, Aegis was seven years ago which means your character should not live right now. Your character should be either from Axios or Atlas. 

    -Your definitions of powergaming is incorrect and your metagaming definition is too vague.

    -Try and keep your character from one place, it is alright to state he travels but including multiple places can cause confusion and common errors.

    -Try and make your biography flow like a story, remember to check your spelling and punctuation.

    -Do not use underscores within your Interesting facts.

    -Please include more details with your character description.

    -Dragons are not commonly around upon the server, so it would not make sense to receive a scar from one. 

     

    You have 24 hours to make the following changes, please message me upon the forums when they have been made or if you have any questions regarding the application process.

     

     

  9. Under Review

    Application Pending!

     

    Please assure the following changes are made:

     

    -Your definitions of Powergaming and Metagaming are too vague and not clear, please make them more specific

    -Please assure that your biography includes at least one piece of server lore, E.G where was he born (must be a place that exists within the server etc)

    -Please assure you double check your punctuation and spelling.

     

    You have 24 hours to make the following changes, please message me upon the forums once you have made the required changes or if you need help with the writing of your character profile!

  10. under review

    Application Pending!

     

    Your application was well written and has a lovely vibe to your character, however assure the following changes are made:

     

    -Avoid using names for the town your character is from, as the town isn't actually part of the server lore. 

    -Try and include your character's strengths and weakness', something she is good at and something she struggles with. E.G she could be

    an excellent huntsman but needs work in her swordsmanship etc.

     

    You have 24 hours to make these changes, please message me upon the forums once you have made the necessary changes or if you need any guidance to writing your character profile. 

  11. Under Review.

    Application pending!

     

    -You must include at least one piece of server lore. 

    -Please assure that your biography flows like a story would. 

    -The term 'werewolf' is commonly known as Feral, which cannot be applied for until you have advanced upon the server.

    -The options you can choose from to apply for upon your first application are the following: Human (Highlander, heartlander, farfolk) Orc (Uruk, Olog etc) Elf (High Elf, Wood Elf, Dark Elf or Snow Elf) or Dwarf.

    -You need more depth for your weakness', strengths 

    -Your skin also does not fit with the criteria in which we accept upon Lord Of The Craft also. 

     

    You have 24 hours to make these changes. If you have any questions or have made the changes, then message me upon the forums!

     

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