TheIchorDruid

-Please correct both your powergaming and metagaming definition - you can find them here: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page .  But please remember to write the definitions in your own words.

-Please include more detail within your biography, perhaps what her parents were like, what did she do whilst growing up? etc.

-You must include at least one piece of server lore within your biography, this can be an existing culture on our  server or a place where she was born? (It must be a place that currently exists on our map, Atlas)

-With Character description, you must describe the physical traits of your character.

-You must provide one weakness of your character in your interesting facts.

You have twenty four hours to make the following changes, failure to do so will result in an automatic denial. 

If you need any further assistance please feel free to contact me on the forums, or my discord Torky#3015

We also encourage new players to join the new player discord where our lovely application team members and helpers can assist you with any questions or queries. 

Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Congratulations! If you need any further assistance, feel free to contact me on the forums or discord!

Your application was well written, but please ensure that you do not include that your character's father was a mayor of Pembrokeshire. If you wish to achieve nobility within nations, that is something you will have to seek through roleplay interactions!

You have twenty four hours to make the following changes, failure to do so will result in denial.

We encourage all new players to join the new player discord, where our lovely team and helpers can assist you with any questions or queries you might have. 

Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Congratulations! If you need any further help feel free to contact me on the forums, or my discord: Torky#3015

We also encourage new players to join our new player discord where our lovely team and helpers can answer any questions or queries you might have!

Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw 

Please remember to edit your application rather than making a new one, you can do so by clicking the 'edit' button. 

I shall give you a six hour expansion atop of the given twenty four hours, if you're still confused. Please do contact me on discord:

Torky#3015

-Please put more detail into your power-gaming and meta-gaming definitions. 

-Please make some changes to your biography, The King of the wood elves, Malin.  Is no longer around - the king passed a long time before your character was born. Therefore it would not make sense for your character's father to have met him, nor fight beside him. 

-Please put a little more detail into your character description.

You have twenty four hours to make the following changes before your application is deemed denied. 

If you have any questions or concerns, please feel free to message me on the forums or my discord: Torky#3015

We also encourage new folk to join the new player discord where our lovely staff members and helpers can answer your questions!

Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

There are still areas that need improving, I am more than happy to sit through the application stage process with you on discord and help you with the formatting of your application! You can re-apply as soon as you get this message, just message me on discord and I will be more than happy to assist you!

There are still aspects of your application that needs fixing, I will give you an extended six hours to make the following changes:

-Please assure you include at least one piece of server lore, this could be where your character lived or a certain culture that he follows. This means, it has to be something that is already (or was) present on our sever.

-Double check your spelling and punctuation to ensure that your biography makes sense.

If you require any more assistance, please feel free to contact me on my discord: Torky#3015

This means that there are a few things in your application that needs fixing:

-Please correct your biography to something original, your biography cannot be based on a person and must be your own material. I.E William Cosby is based from Bill Cosby. 

You have  twenty four hours to make these changes, failure to do so will result in an automatic denial. 

We also encourage new players to join the new player discord where our lovely application team and helpers can assist you with any questions you might have.

Discord: https://discord.gg/afDdHq

You have twenty four hours to make the following changes, before your application is denied:

-Please assure you include at least one piece of server lore, this could be where your character lived or a certain culture that he follows. This means, it has to be something that is already (or was) present on our sever.

-Double check your spelling and punctuation to ensure that your biography makes sense.

-Please assure that you correct your Metagaming and Powergaming definition (the meanings are correct, just assure they make sense)

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message me on the forums or my discord: Torky#3015

We also encourage you to join our new player discord, where our lovely application team and helpers can answer any questions you might have. Or if you just wish for a friendly conversation!: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

Application Accepted!

A very well written and immersive biography that I thoroughly enjoyed. I look forward to seeing you upon our server and watch you develop your character.

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to contact me on the forums.

We also encourage new players to join our new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw