I believe I have fixed everything: I changed the colour of the clothes to be more suiting and added the name of the town which I got by asking around the discord server.
Tonica was born during Autumn in a port town, he grew up on the sea always looking to the horizon. Taught to sail and fish from his father, by his mother to cook. His town eventually became prone to pirate raids forcing the inhabitants to fend for themselves. Tonica was conscripted at the age of 21 as a naval guard and a sailor for the local defence group. he spent most of his days sailing out to find lost, damaged and threatened ships nearby. It was during a terrible storm that his ship and crew were sent out to recover a cargo ship called the 'Aurums Pride'. During the search Tonica fell from the mast as the ship collided with unseen rocks. He fell onto the deck and was carried away with the wreckage until reaching the shore near a place called Halsworthy.