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Tonica Time

By Tonica Time

    • Rules: Yes
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is using IRL knowledge to benefit your character during RP
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is stating how annother player is effected by your action.
    Status: Accepted

Tonica was born during Autumn in a port town, he grew up on the sea always looking to the horizon. Taught to sail and fish from his father, by his mother to cook. His town eventually became prone to pirate raids forcing the inhabitants to fend for themselves. Tonica was conscripted at the age of 21 as a naval guard and a sailor for the local defence group. he spent most of his days sailing out to find lost, damaged and threatened ships nearby. It was during a terrible storm that his ship and crew were sent out to recover a cargo ship called the 'Aurums Pride'. During the search Tonica fell from the mast as the ship collided with unseen rocks. He fell onto the deck and was carried away with the wreckage until reaching the shore near a place called Halsworthy.

Character Name: Tomica Time
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 35
Physical Description: Rich green eyes, brown hair, light skin, bearded, wears an orange shirt with a brown coat, grey pants all made from various furs and hides.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Chorale__

Your application has been placed on...

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-Your application is good, but I noticed that there are zero references to LotC lore in your biography. Lore can be found via the wiki or the lore subforum. 

-I also would like it if you would change the outfit of your character to make it so that it looks a little more towards our time period. The head is good, but the torso and down could use some work. If you would like, you can cut and paste one of the outfits onto your skin from our Skin Archive.

 

If you find yourself confused then LotC has a new player Discord where we have helpers in there to help alongside the Application Moderators. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/brPt8We

 

You have 24 hours from the time I post my reply to make these changes, if you fail to do so then your application will be denied. You can go about doing this by using the [Edit] feature on the bottom left-hand side of your post. If you're denied, then you must wait 3 hours to create another application from the time that it's denied. When you make the changes then contact me and I will review the application again.

 

If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. Good luck, and thanks for applying!

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Tonica Time

I believe I have fixed everything: I changed the colour of the clothes to be more suiting and added the name of the town which I got by asking around the discord server.

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Chorale__

Your application has been...

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I enjoyed reading over your application, and I'm very glad to welcome you to our server! Hold tight, and you'll be implemented as a whitelisted player shortly. While you wait, feel free to browse the forums or the wiki. We also have a New Player Discord, where there are helpers at hand alongside Application Moderators. If you'd like, you can also join our general Discord where you can chat it up with our community.

Here are the links:

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If you have any questions at all then feel free to contact me via Discord @ Chorale_#4767, PM's on the forums, or on the server. My username is Chorale_, I have another whitelisted account that's named Chorale__, so you can PM either one of those. 

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