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    Hey! As you can see we’ve unfortunately had to deny your application, see below for detailed reasons as to why:

     

    • Your definitions for power and meta-gaming are not exactly correct, please refer to our definitions page, which can be found here.

    • Your character biography is too short as it contains less then 10 sentences.

    • Your character biography fails to mention two (2) lore references, our wiki page which contains all of our current lore can be found here.

    • Your physical description could use more detail.

    • Your personality traits and quirks need at least one (1) major drawback or negative aspect.

    • In your roleplay scenario, your emotes should be in third person and use a little more detail, as an example you would write Sophia think for a moment with furrowed brows. “I live adventures! But as of now I am looking for a job.”  which should be applied to every emote that you do, for further assistance on this, please message myself (My contact info is below) or refer to our roleplay guide on the wiki, which can be found here.

     

    Don’t worry! You’re free to apply immediately, just please do remember to edit and change all things listed above and you’re then free to re-submit your application!


     

    If you’re needing help please feel free to message me here on the forums, or contact me over discord (stickyhon#5642). If you see me in game you’re also free to send me a messaging by typing /msg stickyhon, if you are unable to do so please join our new player discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

     

    You may also use /creq in game to contact myself or a fellow CT member for assistance.

    It’s also recommended that you read our wiki, which you can find here.

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    Hey! As you can see, your application is almost complete! Don’t worry, you’re doing very well, but we ask that you please make the following changes to your application:

     

    • Thank you for making the previous edits that I requested, however you’re not missing two lore references in your character biography, please make a update to this to include a second lore reference.


     

    You have 24 hours to make the changes above, once you’ve finished correcting everything or if you need help, please contact me!

     

    Feel free to message me here on the forums, or over discord (stickyhon#5642), you may also contact me in game with /msg stickyhon!

     

    Please also feel free to use the wiki, which you can find here, As well as the settlement guides, which you can find here.

    If you’re unable to reach me, please join the new player discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

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    Hey! As you can see, your application is almost complete! Don’t worry, you’re doing very well, but we ask that you please make the following changes to your application:

     

    • You’ve applied to play a wood elf, however wood elves’ height is capped off at 5’11”, please edit this to better fit the wood elf physical features, if you’re unsure the wood elf wiki can be found here.

    • It seems that you’ve applied with an existing or previous family from about 200-300 years ago in character that no longer exists, we also do not allow people to apply for families unless they have the permission from the family head, if this is a mistake please have the family head comment on this application or message me on discord, if not please change your biography to better fit this.

    • In your personality traits and quirks you have what appears to be all negatives, we prefer that you have at least two (2) positive quirks, and one (1) negative, although more than that is more then welcome, please updated your application to better fit this. 


     

    You have 24 hours to make the changes above, once you’ve finished correcting everything or if you need help, please contact me!

     

    Feel free to message me here on the forums, or over discord (stickyhon#5642), you may also contact me in game with /msg stickyhon!

     

    Please also feel free to use the wiki, which you can find here, As well as the settlement guides, which you can find here.

    If you’re unable to reach me, please join the new player discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

     

     

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    Hey! As you can see, your application is almost complete! Don’t worry, you’re doing very well, but we ask that you please make the following changes to your application:

     

    • Although you’ve updated everything I’ve asked, I still still feel as though your meta-gaming definition needs work, once again please take a look at our definitions page, which can be found here, If you’re unsure what it is that still needs to be changed, please contact me (stickyhon#5642) and I will be more than willing to assist you.


     

    You have 24 hours to make the changes above, once you’ve finished correcting everything or if you need help, please contact me!

     

    Feel free to message me here on the forums, or over discord (stickyhon#5642), you may also contact me in game with /msg stickyhon!

     

    Please also feel free to use the wiki, which you can find here, As well as the settlement guides, which you can find here.

    If you’re unable to reach me, please join the new player discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

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    Hey! As you can see we’ve unfortunately had to deny your application, see below for detailed reasons as to why:

     

    • Your character biography says that your entire family was killed by orcs, unfortunately we no longer accept applications containing this due to it’s overuse, please change this when you re-apply.

    • The part in your biography that mentions your character’s ‘lovers fling’ is not appropriate for the server, please remove this when you re-apply, I suggest making sure that you read all of our rules, which can be found here.

    • Please specify what elven subrace you plan on playing and be sure to make sure that your description and skin match with this, the elven subrace wiki page can be found here if you’re unsure.

    • Your discord ID is not appropriate, please change this before re-applying.

    • Please make sure that you have two (2) current lore references in your bio, our wiki page which holds all of the current lore can be found here.

     

    Don’t worry! You’re free to apply immediately, just please do remember to edit and change all things listed above and you’re then free to re-submit your application!


     

    If you’re needing help please feel free to message me here on the forums, or contact me over discord (stickyhon#5642). If you see me in game you’re also free to send me a messaging by typing /msg stickyhon, if you are unable to do so please join our new player discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

     

    You may also use /creq in game to contact myself or a fellow CT member for assistance.

    It’s also recommended that you read our wiki, which you can find here.

     

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    Hey! As you can see we’ve unfortunately had to deny your application, see below for detailed reasons as to why:

     

    • Your definitions for meta and power-gaming are questionable and it seems that you ran out of space while doing them, please be mindful of this when you re-apply, our definitions page can be found here, which may assist you when you re-apply.

    • In your character biography you referenced caucasian people, lore-wise this is technically incorrect, and would instead be Heartlanders or Highlanders, which you can read about here.

    • In your character biography you referenced ‘The Golden Rebellion’ this was an event that took place in Anthos, which in character was over 300 years ago, when you re-apply please be sure to read this Arcas’ lore, which can be found here.

    • Once again, you referred to Anthos in your bio, Anthos was about 300 years ago and due to the fact that your character is only 36 he would not have been able to be there, see the link above to read up on the current lore of the current realm.

    • In your character bio, you also claimed that Raiu jumped into a freezing river and stayed there frozen for a few years and was later unfrozen, this is not realistic for several reasons, mainly due to the fact that this is a medieval roleplay server, and medicine is not far enough advanced for this to happen.

    • Lastly from what I count, you only have 8 sentences in your character biography, when you decide to re-apply, please be sure to make at least 10.

     

    Don’t worry! You’re free to apply immediately, just please do remember to edit and change all things listed above and you’re then free to re-submit your application!


     

    If you’re needing help please feel free to message me here on the forums, or contact me over discord (stickyhon#5642). If you see me in game you’re also free to send me a messaging by typing /msg stickyhon, if you are unable to do so please join our new player discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

     

    You may also use /creq in game to contact myself or a fellow CT member for assistance.

    It’s also recommended that you read our wiki, which you can find here.

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    Hey! As you can see, your application is almost complete! Don’t worry, you’re doing very well, but we ask that you please make the following changes to your application:

     

    • Your power-gaming definition is excellent! But I wouldn’t mind seeing a bit more definition added to meta-gaming, if needed here is a link to our definitions page.

    • For your personality traits/quirks, we ask that you include at least two (2) positive traits, and at least one (1) negative, I feel as though you have all negatives, so please add a few positives to that.

    • In your roleplay scenario, you put your character’s thoughts into quotes, unfortunately this does not fulfill the requirements to have two spoken sentences in your scenario, that being said I would like to clarify that you should not emote your thoughts directly, as this opens you for potential to be meta-gamed, I would like to refer you to this wiki page to make sure that you understand this. 


     

    You have 24 hours to make the changes above, once you’ve finished correcting everything or if you need help, please contact me!

     

    Feel free to message me here on the forums, or over discord (stickyhon#5642), you may also contact me in game with /msg stickyhon!

     

    Please also feel free to use the wiki, which you can find here, As well as the settlement guides, which you can find here.

    If you’re unable to reach me, please join the new player discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

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    Hey! Your application has been accepted, welcome to the server! I’d like to say that you did an excellent job on your application, and be the first to welcome you to the community of LoTC!

     

    In order to get started, feel free to message me on discord (stickyhon#5642) or in game 

    /msg stickyhon, or make a /creq in game, and request a CT monk to help you get started.

     

    Here are some links to help you get started!

     

    New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

     

    Main Wiki Page: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

     

    New Player Guide: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide

     

    Settlement Guides: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides


     

    And lastly, remember to have fun, we look forward to seeing you on the server in the future!

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    Hey! As you can see we’ve unfortunately had to deny your application, see below for detailed reasons as to why:

     

    • Your power and meta-gaming definitions are incorrect, please refer to our meta and power-gaming definitions here.

    • You applied as a halfling, but in your character biography you described your character as a half-elf, this are two different races, please refer to our halfling wiki here.

    • In your biography you applied as the child of two royal powers, this unfortunately is not allowed, please change this when you re-apply.

    • In your biography you describe yourself as 185 cms and slightly muscular, but only weigh 65-70 pounds, this is not realistic, please change before re-applying.

    • In your quirks and personality section you need to include at least one (1) significant negative trait.

    • In your roleplay scenario you need to include quotation marks on either side of a sentence (””). 

     

    Don’t worry! You’re free to apply immediately, just please do remember to edit and change all things listed above and you’re then free to re-submit your application!


     

    If you’re needing help please feel free to message me here on the forums, or contact me over discord (stickyhon#5642). If you see me in game you’re also free to send me a messaging by typing /msg stickyhon, if you are unable to do so please join our new player discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

     

    You may also use /creq in game to contact myself or a fellow CT member for assistance.

    It’s also recommended that you read our wiki, which you can find here.

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    Hey! As you can see, your application is almost complete! Don’t worry, you’re doing very well, but we ask that you please make the following changes to your application:

     

    • It looks like you ran out of space while writing your meta and power-gaming definitions, please either rewrite those to fit or finish them in the comments, you can find the definitions page for those here.

    • You referenced Aegis in your character bio, however Aegis was a previous map and was around over 400 years ago IRPly, your character is only 19 so therefore would not have been able to be on Aegis, please refer to the Arcas lore page, which can be found here.

    • In your character biography you referred to a village called ‘Winterburn’, please refrain from using and/or making up your own villages, instead please look at the current list of human settlements which can be found here.

    • In your character bio we ask that you include at least two (2) lore references, in order to find those you may refer to our wiki, which can be found here.

     

    You have 24 hours to make the changes above, once you’ve finished correcting everything or if you need help, please contact me!

     

    Feel free to message me here on the forums, or over discord (stickyhon#5642), you may also contact me in game with /msg stickyhon!

     

    Please also feel free to use the wiki, which you can find here, As well as the settlement guides, which you can find here.

    If you’re unable to reach me, please join the new player discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

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