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  1. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hey! As you can see, your application is almost complete! Don’t worry, you’re doing very well, but we ask that you please make the following changes to your application:

     

    • Your application is very well written, however you failed to mention two (2) valid lore references, unfortunately the mention of a race name is not valid, so thereofre you only have one (1) valid lore reference, please be sure to include an extra lore reference, which can be found here.


     

    You have 24 hours to make the changes above, once you’ve finished correcting everything or if you need help, please contact me!

     

    Feel free to message me here on the forums, or over discord (stickyhon#5642), you may also contact me in game with /msg stickyhon!

     

    Please also feel free to use the wiki, which you can find here, As well as the settlement guides, which you can find here.

    If you’re unable to reach me, please join the official discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F 

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    Hey! As you can see, your application is almost complete! Don’t worry, you’re doing very well, but we ask that you please make the following changes to your application:

     

    • Renatus no longer exists, and fell a long time ago- therefore your character would not be able to have a connection to it, please change this, and please be sure to be using current and valid lore references, which can be found here.

    • Please be sure to have at least two (2) lore references, the wiki is linked above and below if you’re unsure of where to find these.

    • The fact that your character was married at 20 and had two sons brings up some timeline concerns, please fix this.

    • In your character biography you claim to want to take down the entire empire, this is unrealistic, please change this.

    • You still do not have at least one (1) major negative quirk for your personality traits and quirks, please correct this.


     

    You have 24 hours to make the changes above, once you’ve finished correcting everything or if you need help, please contact me!

     

    Feel free to message me here on the forums, or over discord (stickyhon#5642), you may also contact me in game with /msg stickyhon!

     

    Please also feel free to use the wiki, which you can find here, As well as the settlement guides, which you can find here.

    If you’re unable to reach me, please join the official discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

  3. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hey! As you can see we’ve unfortunately had to deny your application, see below for detailed reasons as to why:

     

    • You have not read the rules, please do so before re-applying, you can find them here.

    • In your character biography you included something very inappropriate and against our rules, something of which does not fall under PG-13, please remove this.

    • From my calculations, due to your characters age she would not have been able to be born in the Citadel, please fix this.

    • In your character biography you failed to mention at least two (2) lore references, please include this in your next application, if you’re unsure of where to find a valid lore reference please refer to our wiki, which can be found here, and be sure that you characters age fits in with this.

     

    Don’t worry! You’re free to apply immediately, just please do remember to edit and change all things listed above and you’re then free to re-submit your application!


     

    If you’re needing help please feel free to message me here on the forums, or contact me over discord (stickyhon#5642). If you see me in game you’re also free to send me a messaging by typing /msg stickyhon, if you are unable to do so please join our official discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F 

     

    You may also use /creq in game to contact myself or a fellow CT member for assistance.

    It’s also recommended that you read our wiki, which you can find here.

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    Hey! As you can see, your application is almost complete! Don’t worry, you’re doing very well, but we ask that you please make the following changes to your application:

     

    • Your power-gaming definition is on the right track, however I feel as though it is lacking, please re-write it using our definitions page, which can be found here.

    • The village of Siramenor is a very recently established, if your character was 18 when she left and is now 50, she would not have been in Siramenor, please change this.

    • In your character biography you claim that Irrinor was burnt down because of humans, this is untrue please fix this.

    • I feel as though that your negative quirk is not big enough, please add in another one or change your current quirk.

    • Your roleplay scenario should be done in third person, not first, please refer to our roleplay guide which can be found here, if you’re unsure of how to achieve this.


     

    You have 24 hours to make the changes above, once you’ve finished correcting everything or if you need help, please contact me!

     

    Feel free to message me here on the forums, or over discord (stickyhon#5642), you may also contact me in game with /msg stickyhon!

     

    Please also feel free to use the wiki, which you can find here, As well as the settlement guides, which you can find here.

    If you’re unable to reach me, please join the official discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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    Hey! As you can see we’ve unfortunately had to deny your application, see below for detailed reasons as to why:

     

    • You failed to edit your application within the allotted amount of time (24 hours).

     

    Don’t worry! You’re free to apply immediately, just please do remember to edit and change all things listed above and you’re then free to re-submit your application!


     

    If you’re needing help please feel free to message me here on the forums, or contact me over discord (stickyhon#5642). If you see me in game you’re also free to send me a messaging by typing /msg stickyhon, if you are unable to do so please join our official discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F 

     

    You may also use /creq in game to contact myself or a fellow CT member for assistance.

    It’s also recommended that you read our wiki, which you can find here.

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    Hey! Your application has been accepted, welcome to the server! I’d like to say that you did an excellent job on your application, and be the first to welcome you to the community of LoTC!

     

    In order to get started, feel free to message me on discord (stickyhon#5642) or in game 

    /msg stickyhon, or make a /creq in game, and request a CT monk to help you get started.

     

    Here are some links to help you get started!

     

    Official Discord: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F 

     

    Main Wiki Page: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

     

    New Player Guide: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide

     

    Settlement Guides: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides


     

    And lastly, remember to have fun, we look forward to seeing you on the server in the future!

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    Hey! Your application has been accepted, welcome to the server! I’d like to say that you did an excellent job on your application, and be the first to welcome you to the community of LoTC!

     

    In order to get started, feel free to message me on discord (stickyhon#5642) or in game 

    /msg stickyhon, or make a /creq in game, and request a CT monk to help you get started.

     

    Here are some links to help you get started!

     

    Official Discord: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F 

     

    Main Wiki Page: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

     

    New Player Guide: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide

     

    Settlement Guides: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides


     

    And lastly, remember to have fun, we look forward to seeing you on the server in the future!

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    Hey! As you can see, your application is almost complete! Don’t worry, you’re doing very well, but we ask that you please make the following changes to your application:

     

    • Your app is really well done! Unfortunately we don’t allow people to apply with made up settlements, please change this.

    • The max height for halflings is 3’0”, you applied as 3’10”, please change this.


     

    You have 24 hours to make the changes above, once you’ve finished correcting everything or if you need help, please contact me!

     

    Feel free to message me here on the forums, or over discord (stickyhon#5642), you may also contact me in game with /msg stickyhon!

     

    Please also feel free to use the wiki, which you can find here, As well as the settlement guides, which you can find here.

    If you’re unable to reach me, please join the official discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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    Hey! As you can see, your application is almost complete! Don’t worry, you’re doing very well, but we ask that you please make the following changes to your application:

     

    • Your character biography is pretty well written, however it is a little too short, please be sure that it is at least ten (10) sentences long.

    • In your character biography you referenced a connection to an existing family, please have the family head message me on discord (stickyhon#5642to confirm that you have their permission.

    • Your skin is not up to LotC standards, if you are in need of a skin to be made for your character, please join our discord (Linked Below) to request a player made skin, which will be paid for by the community team.

    • In your personality traits and quirks we ask that you please have at least two (2) positive traits, and at least one (1) major negative quirk, please be sure to include this.


     

    You have 24 hours to make the changes above, once you’ve finished correcting everything or if you need help, please contact me!

     

    Feel free to message me here on the forums, or over discord (stickyhon#5642), you may also contact me in game with /msg stickyhon!

     

    Please also feel free to use the wiki, which you can find here, As well as the settlement guides, which you can find here.

    If you’re unable to reach me, please join the official discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F 

  10. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hey! As you can see, your application is almost complete! Don’t worry, you’re doing very well, but we ask that you please make the following changes to your application:

     

    • Your meta and power-gaming definitions are on the right track, however I still feel as though they are lacking, please read over our definitions page here and re-write them.

    • In your character biography we ask that you please have at least two (2) lore references, unfortunately we don’t count naming a race as a lore reference, so please be sure to include something else, if you’re unsure of what to do please refer to our wiki, which can be found here.


     

    You have 24 hours to make the changes above, once you’ve finished correcting everything or if you need help, please contact me!

     

    Feel free to message me here on the forums, or over discord (stickyhon#5642), you may also contact me in game with /msg stickyhon!

     

    Please also feel free to use the wiki, which you can find here, As well as the settlement guides, which you can find here.

    If you’re unable to reach me, please join the official discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F 

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    Hey! As you can see we’ve unfortunately had to deny your application, see below for detailed reasons as to why:

     

    • Your meta and power-gaming definitions are lacking in detail, and are incorrect, please refer to our definitions page here.

    • You claim that your character was born in 1605, and is 18, however the current year in game is 1764, therefore these dates do not line up, when re-applying please make sure that all of your dates line up.

    • In your character biography you claim to be 24, however applied with an 18 year old character, please fix this when re-applying.

    • Although your character biography is long enough and does contain at least two lore references, I would still like to see a bit of improvement upon it, please add more detail before re-applying, if you need assistance please message myself or another CT member, you may also refer to our wiki here.

    • For your personality traits and quirks, we ask that you please have at least two (2) positive traits, and one (1) major negative quirk, when re-applying please be sure to include this.

    • In your roleplay scenario, your dialogue should be in quotes (””) and your actions should be in third person, please fix this when re-applying, if you’re unsure of how to do this refer to our roleplay guide, which can be found here.

     

    Don’t worry! You’re free to apply immediately, just please do remember to edit and change all things listed above and you’re then free to re-submit your application!


     

    If you’re needing help please feel free to message me here on the forums, or contact me over discord (stickyhon#5642). If you see me in game you’re also free to send me a messaging by typing /msg stickyhon, if you are unable to do so please join our official discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F 

     

    You may also use /creq in game to contact myself or a fellow CT member for assistance.

    It’s also recommended that you read our wiki, which you can find here.

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