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Application Comments posted by MC_BreadStick
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Pending
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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:
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Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand! In addition, please elaborate on your metagaming definition, and make sure that you fully understand what each word means. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
- Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
- https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
- https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
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https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
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Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
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Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one.
- Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.
- https://app.grammarly.com/
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @BreadStick#5363 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well.
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Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand! In addition, please elaborate on your metagaming definition, and make sure that you fully understand what each word means. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to having too many errors, though here are the changes that would need to be made:
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Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help
- Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
- https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
- https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
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https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
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Your character biography states that you killed multiple orcs within Oren. This can be considered powergaming. If this is your character’s background then make sure that it has legitimate lore references to back it up.
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Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.
- Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
- Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
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Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.
- The roleplay scenario has the quotation marks and emotes flipped. Please make sure that what your character says is in quotation marks, and what they do is between *
After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @BreadStick#5363, and I recommend you join the Lord of The Craft Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F0 -
Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help
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Changed Status to Denied
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to not completing revisions within 24 hours, though here are the changes that would need to be made:
- Having a “Connection” with Yamekar is not a trait or personality, that is only a belief. Please change that. Also can you clarify that he thinks he has a connection to Yamekar please? Directly stating such isn’t really a legitimate thing.
After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @BreadStick#5363, and I recommend you join the Lord of The Craft Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F0 -
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to not making changes within the 24 hour mark, though here are the changes that would need to be made:
- Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
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https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
- Please make sure your personality is strictly personality. It also needs to have at least one negative personality trait.
After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @BreadStick#5363, and I recommend you join the Lord of The Craft Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F0 -
Changed Status to Accepted
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Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft! I am very impressed by your application! Congrats on going through first try!!
Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you. If you need any help, you can message me in game by doing /msg MC_Breadstick, or if I’m not online, you can find me on Discord @BreadStick#5363. Lastly, if you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do /creq along with a message as to what you need, and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!
After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:
/creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!
When joining, the bot may be down that normally automatically whitelists you after the acceptance of your application. So, please go into the wandering soul channel (#ws) and ask for a Community Team Member to accept you!
I highly recommend you join the LotC discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Guide!
In addition, I recommend taking a look at our Settlement Guides. Below, I’ve linked the settlements you may be interested in based on your character’s race.
If you aren’t interested in any of those, take a look at our Settlement Guide Hub!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Elven_Settlement_Guides
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Pending
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Changed Status to Under Review
Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:
- Having a “Connection” with Yamekar is not a trait or personality, that is only a belief. Please change that. Also can you clarify that he thinks he has a connection to Yamekar please? Directly stating such isn’t really a legitimate thing.
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @BreadStick#5363 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well.
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Changed Status to Accepted
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Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!
Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you. If you need any help, you can message me in game by doing /msg MC_Breadstick, or if I’m not online, you can find me on Discord @BreadStick#5363. Lastly, if you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do /creq along with a message as to what you need, and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!
After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:
/creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!
When joining, the bot may be down that normally automatically whitelists you after the acceptance of your application. So, please go into the wandering soul channel (#ws) and ask for a Community Team Member to accept you!
I highly recommend you join the LotC discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Guide!
In addition, I recommend taking a look at our Settlement Guides. Below, I’ve linked the settlements you may be interested in based on your character’s race.
If you aren’t interested in any of those, take a look at our Settlement Guide Hub!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Elven_Settlement_Guides
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Changed Status to Under Review
Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:
- Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
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https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
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Please make sure your personality is strictly personality. It also needs to have at least one negative personality trait.
- Your biography may need to be altered, so please message me on discord so we can talk about that.
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @BreadStick#5363 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well.
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Changed Status to Pending
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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:
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Please make sure that your character is connected to real server lore. The clan name either does not exist, or was removed from the wiki, so please choose a different clan name (Or don’t have one at all and later join a clan in game).
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Your character bio also needs to have at least 2 lore references. so please make sure you have these. You can find lore in our forums or the main page. (Below this portion of the text)
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Please elaborate on your character’s personality. You need to have more info on what they are like, with at least one negative personality trait. In addition, please remove the part about zombies as those do not exist in LotC. You can look at beasts on the wiki as well.
- Please fix all grammatical errors. You can use any sort of spelling/grammar assistance program if you wish, just please make sure you make the application neat.
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @BreadStick#5363 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well.
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Please make sure that your character is connected to real server lore. The clan name either does not exist, or was removed from the wiki, so please choose a different clan name (Or don’t have one at all and later join a clan in game).
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Changed Status to Pending
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Changed Status to Under Review
Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:
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If you could change San’Kala to a different city then it would abide by lore. San’Kala as of right now is non-existent (It just hasn’t been updated in the wiki). If you’re looking for an orc nation to be born in then Krugmar would be the best option. Up to you.
- Your roleplay scenario is also too short, please make it at least 4 sentences long, and have one action and one segment of speech in it. Thank you!
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @BreadStick#5363 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well.
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If you could change San’Kala to a different city then it would abide by lore. San’Kala as of right now is non-existent (It just hasn’t been updated in the wiki). If you’re looking for an orc nation to be born in then Krugmar would be the best option. Up to you.
SweatyBoi69
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Changed Status to Under Review