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Changed Status to Denied
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to not completing revisions within the 24 hour time period, though here are the changes that would need to be made:
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Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
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Your Character Biography is missing some lore references. Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
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Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are?
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Your Physical Description lacks in detail, so please add some more; things like hair color, eye color, height, hair length, etc.
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks are also a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.
- Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. https://app.grammarly.com/
After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @BreadStick#5363, and I recommend you join the Lord of The Craft Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F0 -
Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
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Changed Status to Accepted
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Changed Status to Under Review
Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!
Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you. If you need any help, you can message me in game by doing /msg MC_Breadstick, or if I’m not online, you can find me on Discord @BreadStick#5363. Lastly, if you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do /creq along with a message as to what you need, and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!
After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:
/creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!
When joining, the bot may be down that normally automatically whitelists you after the acceptance of your application. So, please go into the wandering soul channel (#ws) and ask for a Community Team Member to accept you!
I highly recommend you join the LotC discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Guide!
In addition, I recommend taking a look at our Settlement Guides. Below, I’ve linked the settlements you may be interested in based on your character’s race.
If you aren’t interested in any of those, take a look at our Settlement Guide Hub!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Elven_Settlement_Guides
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Changed Status to Accepted
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Changed Status to Under Review
Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!
Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you. If you need any help, you can message me in game by doing /msg MC_Breadstick, or if I’m not online, you can find me on Discord @BreadStick#5363. Lastly, if you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do /creq along with a message as to what you need, and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!
After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:
/creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!
When joining, the bot may be down that normally automatically whitelists you after the acceptance of your application. So, please go into the wandering soul channel (#ws) and ask for a Community Team Member to accept you!
I highly recommend you join the LotC discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Guide!
In addition, I recommend taking a look at our Settlement Guides. Below, I’ve linked the settlements you may be interested in based on your character’s race.
If you aren’t interested in any of those, take a look at our Settlement Guide Hub!
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https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides
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https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Elven_Settlement_Guides
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Changed Status to Under Review
Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!
Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you. If you need any help, you can message me in game by doing /msg MC_Breadstick, or if I’m not online, you can find me on Discord @BreadStick#5363. Lastly, if you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do /creq along with a message as to what you need, and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!
After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:
/creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!
When joining, the bot may be down that normally automatically whitelists you after the acceptance of your application. So, please go into the wandering soul channel (#ws) and ask for a Community Team Member to accept you!
I highly recommend you join the LotC discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Guide!
In addition, I recommend taking a look at our Settlement Guides. Below, I’ve linked the settlements you may be interested in based on your character’s race.
If you aren’t interested in any of those, take a look at our Settlement Guide Hub!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Elven_Settlement_Guides
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Changed Status to Pending
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Changed Status to Under Review
Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:
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Your Character Biography is missing some lore references. Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
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Your Skin is indeed a little too flashy. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
Perhaps if you got armor that was not as brightly colored.
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @BreadStick#5363 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well.
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Your Character Biography is missing some lore references. Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:
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Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
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Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
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Your skin may or may not follow the guidelines, but it is difficult to tell. If you could post a slightly more legible screenshot of your skin during your revision then that would be much appreciated. If you think your skin may still not pass, then you can pick a skin from the LotC skin archive. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
- Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @BreadStick#5363 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well.
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Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
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Changed Status to Under Review
Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!
Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you. If you need any help, you can message me in game by doing /msg MC_Breadstick, or if I’m not online, you can find me on Discord @BreadStick#5363. Lastly, if you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do /creq along with a message as to what you need, and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!
After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:
/creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!
When joining, the bot may be down that normally automatically whitelists you after the acceptance of your application. So, please go into the wandering soul channel (#ws) and ask for a Community Team Member to accept you!
I highly recommend you join the LotC discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Guide!
In addition, I recommend taking a look at our Settlement Guides. Below, I’ve linked the settlements you may be interested in based on your character’s race.
If you aren’t interested in any of those, take a look at our Settlement Guide Hub!
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Congratulations, you’ve been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft!
Now that you’re accepted, you will spawn in Cloud Temple as a player and be able to interact with the world around you. If you need any help, you can message me in game by doing /msg MC_Breadstick, or if I’m not online, you can find me on Discord @BreadStick#5363. Lastly, if you need any guidance in-game, and I am not around, please do /creq along with a message as to what you need, and another Community Team Member will get to you as soon as possible!
After reading the below information and logging into LotC, I highly recommend sending this in chat so a Community Team Member can help you out:
/creq I have just been accepted and would like a Wilven Monk!
When joining, the bot may be down that normally automatically whitelists you after the acceptance of your application. So, please go into the wandering soul channel (#ws) and ask for a Community Team Member to accept you!
I highly recommend you join the LotC discord using the invite link below, and please look through the New Player Guide!
In addition, I recommend taking a look at our Settlement Guides. Below, I’ve linked the settlements you may be interested in based on your character’s race.
If you aren’t interested in any of those, take a look at our Settlement Guide Hub!
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https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides
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https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Elven_Settlement_Guides
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Changed Status to Pending
Very close! But your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:
- Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @BreadStick#5363 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well.
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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:
- Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly. I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help 🙂
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https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
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Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
In addition to this, your bio references a place (Ager) which is a place that no longer exists. Please make sure that you character is from a place that is still around ^^. - Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. https://app.grammarly.com/
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @BreadStick#5363 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well.
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Changed Status to Pending
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Changed Status to Under Review
Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:
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Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
- Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. https://app.grammarly.com/
If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @BreadStick#5363 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well.
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Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.
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DarthStryx
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Changed Status to Pending
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bbyhope
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Changed Status to Under Review
Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to not having any changes made within the 24 hour mark, though here are the changes that would need to be made:
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
In addition to this, your bio references a place (Ager) which is a place that no longer exists. Please make sure that you character is from a place that is still around ^^.
After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @BreadStick#5363, and I recommend you join the Lord of The Craft Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F