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    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

    • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

    • Your Definition of Roleplay is incorrect. Please make sure to include a proper Definition of Roleplay in your application. This can be found on our very own Wiki! Feel free to let me know if you need help!  

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

    • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

    • Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

    • Your Character Age is too old. You must play a character of at most 50 years. 

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

    • Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

    • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

    • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

    Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Kingo#1523]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message KingoArcher to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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  2. Changed Status to Under Review

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    Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

    To get started, I suggest doing; /creq Can a CT wilven monk come assist me starting out?

    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out! :

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

     

    Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Kingo#1523]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

    Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/ 

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

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  3. Changed Status to Under Review

    Hi, It looks like you have 3 accounts under the same IP address, mind PMing me on discord at Kingo#1523 or sending me a message over the forums so we can talk about it? Thanks.  Also, Just so you know, as a knew player, you cannot learn alchemy.

  4. Changed Status to Pending

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    Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

    To get started, I suggest doing; /creq Can a CT wilven monk come assist me starting out?

    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out! :

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

     

    Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Kingo#1523]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

    Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/ 

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

    • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race.  Please check your height.

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

    • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

    • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message KingoArcher. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Kingo#1523

     

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

    If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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    Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

    To get started, I suggest doing; /creq Can a CT wilven monk come assist me starting out?

    Here are some links you may find useful while starting out! :

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

     

    Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Kingo#1523]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

    Lastly, For guides, tutorials, and how to request help from a CT member, please head to the New Player Hub found here: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/ 

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forward to seeing you around in future!

     

    Also, with your question, brothels, rape, and prostitution are strictly prohibited on LOTC and any reference to them is NOT allowed.

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  7. Changed Status to Denied

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    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

    • Your Character Biography states that there are skeletons in almaris.  This is false.  Please read the wiki and fix this. This should also be fixed in other parts of your application.

    • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

    • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

    Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Kingo#1523]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message KingoArcher to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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  8. Changed Status to Pending

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message KingoArcher. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Kingo#1523

     

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

    If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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  9. Changed Status to Pending

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message KingoArcher. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Kingo#1523

     

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

    If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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  10. Changed Status to Pending

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    Hi, It looks like you have two applications on the same IP address.  Please msg me at Kingo#1523 on discord so we can talk about it.  You can also shot me a message on the forums.

  11. Changed Status to Denied

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    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

     

    • Your Character Biography includes references to things against our server rules. Please review the server rules and reapply at any time. 

    • Your Character Name includes that of a star wars character.  Please fix this.

    • Your Character Biography states that your character witnessed the rise and fall of the Galactic Republic.  This does not follow server lore.  Feel free to reference the wiki for assistance.

    • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 

    • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

    • Your Personality Traits/Quirks state that he has a 500+ IQ.  This is Powergaming.  Please refer to the Powergaming rules.

    • Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

    • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

    • Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue. Please be sure to add one!

    • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

    Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Kingo#1523]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message KingoArcher to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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