KingoArcher
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Application Comments posted by KingoArcher
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Changed Status to Denied
Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.
Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
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Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
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Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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Your Definition of roleplay is incorrect. Please make sure to include a proper Definition of Roleplay in your application. This can be found on our very own Wiki! Feel free to let me know if you need help!
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Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.
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Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!
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Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.
Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Kingo#1523]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message KingoArcher to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F
Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI
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Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above ♥0 -
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Pending
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
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Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help
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Your Character Biography states that your character’s mother was killed by bandits. This is too common of a character trope on LOTC. Feel free to change it up a bit. Death by arson, disease, and at birth are all great replacements.
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
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Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this to fix the eye color!
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action and have the dialogue left in quotation marks. Please make sure to add one!
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In regards to the rule that you missed, going AFK for any unreasonable amount of time is not okay. Going to run to the bathroom is common practice. Common sense is all thats needed.
You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!
Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message KingoArcher. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Kingo#1523
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI
If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Denied
Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.
Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
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Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help
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Your Definition of Roleplay is incorrect. Please make sure to include a proper Definition of Roleplay in your application. This can be found on our very own Wiki! Feel free to let me know if you need help!
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Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
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Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.
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Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.
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Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!
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Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.
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Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Kingo#1523]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message KingoArcher to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F
Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI
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Changed Status to Under Review
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done
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he dreams to be an Adunian Bowman.
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hi, nice app. Im waiting for mine to get read
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This is my new application
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This is my old application
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PICLEBOB
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Changed Status to Pending
Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.
Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!
You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!
Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message KingoArcher. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Kingo#1523
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI
If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F
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