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Application Comments posted by puffables
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Changed Status to Under Review
Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
- Mm, unfortunately your powergaming and metagaming definitions aren't quite what I’d be looking for – if you could correct and expand upon these, that would be great! Here are links to the correct definitions; just be sure not to plagiarise! ❤️
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
- Your bio is quite short and doesn't seem to contain any lore references – I’m afraid that race names don’t count;; Please make sure to include at least 10 sentences, and at least 1 lore reference! Here is a link to the wiki – you may find it useful in looking for lore references to include! ❤️
You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!
Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI
If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa
❤️
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Changed Status to Accepted
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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!
Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa
You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!
Lastly, here is the new player guide, I recommend you look over it!
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide
Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forwards to seeing you around in future!
❤️
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Changed Status to Pending
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
- Unfortunately, your bio doesn't contain any lore references ;;; Please edit this to include at least one!! This could be a city name, important event, etc. Here is a link to the LotC Wiki, you may find it helpful in looking for lore references to include! ❤️
You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!
Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI
If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa
❤️
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Denied
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.
- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed in the Pending message above! ❤️
Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa
You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!
Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI
❤️
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Changed Status to Accepted
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Changed Status to Under Review
Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!
Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa
You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!
Lastly, here is the new player guide, I recommend you look over it!
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide
Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forwards to seeing you around in future!
❤️
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Changed Status to Pending
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
- Err, you seem preeeetty confused;; I’m afraid LotC isn’t DnD, nor is it a set-in-stone novel-like thing. It’s moreso freeform, your character being able to interact with other players characters, grow, and develop. There is no main character, or anything of the like.
- Your powergaming and metagaming definitions aren’t quite what I’d be looking for,,, please correct these!! Here are links to the correct definitions, just be sure to write them in your own words and not plagiarise!
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming- Your character doesn’t really align with LotC lore, and they cannot have any sort of magical skill, knowledge, or be magical in any way. Your bio is also rather confusing, you state that ‘way later we find out that...’ however I must inform you that LotC isn’t quite DnD or anything of the like, so the assuredness of people finding out something about your character isn’t quite certain – your character is not the ‘main character’, as LotC has no main character. You also seem to use a lot of names from books, might wish to remove this also. It also doesn’t make sense that your character is 24, but they did something – which, relating to previous points, they couldn’t have done – 500 years ago. Please change your bio, to remove the magic and lore unrelated to LotC, and also the protagonist-like statements. Please make sure to include at least 1 LotC lore reference, this could be a city name, important event, etc! Here is a link to the LotC wiki, you may find it useful in looking for lore references to include! ❤️
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Goblins
- Your character name doesn’t sound particularly goblin-like, you may wish to change this,, Names also tend to have a capital letter at the start, being a proper noun ?
- Your personality traits and quirks don’t seem to include a negative, please do make sure to add a negative personality trait! ❤️
- Your roleplay scenario isn’t quite right, and references some of the things from your bio that must be changed,, it also seems to be a tad jokey, with apparently a.. creeper at the end?;; If you could perhaps make it a response only from your character, and format it more like the example – quotation marks (”) around speech, and some actions outside the speech marks, that would be fantastic! ❤️
You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!
Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI
If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa
❤️
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Changed Status to Under Review
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Changed Status to Denied
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.
- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed in the Pending message above! ❤️
Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa
You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!
Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI
❤️
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LCxAISLING
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Changed Status to Denied
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LCxAISLING
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.
- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed in the Pending message above! ❤️
Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!
Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa
You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!
Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI
❤️
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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!
Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa
You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!
Lastly, here is the new player guide, I recommend you look over it!
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide
Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forwards to seeing you around in future!
❤️
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
- Your powergaming and metagaming definitions still aren’t really there I’m afraid;; please do correct these! Here are links to the correct definitions, just be sure to write them in your own words and not plagiarise! ❤️ ❤️
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming- Your bio isn’t formatted particularly well, if you could perhaps split it into more comprehensible sentences making sure it at least 10 sentences long, that would be great! Your bio also doesn’t contain any lore references, I’m afraid;; please make sure to include at least one! Here is a link to the wiki, along with some other links that I think you may find useful! ❤️
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Forest_Dwarf
- Your character doesn’t look particularly forest dwarven still; the skin and description you use are alright, but not quiiite fitting,, please do fix this!! Here is a link to the LotC Skin Archive, where you can find skins that are free to use, reference from, or edit to fit your character. I think you may find this useful ! Also a link to the Forest Dwarf wiki, which contains a description of forest dwarven appearance.
https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Forest_Dwarf ❤️
- Your roleplay scenario still isn’t quite there, if you could perhaps include some actions after, rather than just saying your character is there for adventure, and perhaps having some more detailed speech rather than just hello, that would be much appreciated! ❤️
You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!
Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI
If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa
❤️
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
- Mm, I’m afraid your character couldn’t have been an important military strategist, and this phrase ‘This being said, he has become a young yet reliable military strategist for the High Elves, not hesitating to give his opinions on mistakes made by previous commanders in the Reimposition of Unity and the War of the Two Emperors. Such observations were not received well by others but were (most annoyingly), correct. ’ isn’t quiiite plausible I would think.. Of course, your character could’ve thought that some things may have been done better, but objectively saying that other people’s characters were incorrect and your character corrected their mistakes is rather a stretch, especially seeing as you haven’t done any of this through rp;; perhaps once you’ve joined the server, your character could begin doing this through rp and have their goal to become an important military strategist?
You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!
Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI
If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa
❤️
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
- Mm, your character’s name doesn’t seem particularly elven,, you may wish to change this! Here are some links you might find neat to use while brainstorming character names ?
https://www.fantasynamegenerators.com/elf_names.php
- Your bio is rather short,, please extend this to at least 10 sentences long, still including at least 1 lore reference (which you’ve already done by including Haelun’or)! Also, here are just some links that I think you might find a fun read!! ❤️
https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
- Your physical description and skin don’t quite seem to match >,<;; (the skin has grey eyes while the description reads green, etc.) Also might wish to note that the skin you’re using seems to be a tad misleading/feminine – this might be purposeful, but if not, just informing you that people may get a little confused! Be warned that your character may be referred to with she/her pronouns by those that are unaware;;,, (the eyelashed eyes and dress tend to give that impression, apologies if this is incorrect :,> ). Here is a link to the LotC Skin Archive where you can find skins that are free to use, reference from, or edit to fit your character – just in case you’d wish to change this!
https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home
You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!
Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.
If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI
If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa
❤️
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UselessGoblin
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Changed Status to Pending