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  1. Changed Status to Pending

     

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    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

    - As per the applicant’s request, this application is being denied as they no longer wish to apply to join the server.

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again if you ever change your mind!

     

    Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

    You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

    ❤️

     

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  2. Changed Status to Under Review

     

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

    - Your metagaming and powergaming definitions aren’t quite right, if you could correct these that would be lovely! Here are links to the correct definitions, just remember to write them in your own words and not plagiarise! ❤️

    https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
    https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting
    https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming

    - Your bio is rather short, and doesn’t include any lore references I’m afraid,, If you’d be able to extend your bio to at least 10 sentences long, and include 1 lore reference, it would be much appreciated ❤️ Here is a link to the wiki, you may find it useful in looking for lore references! ❤️

    WIKI

    https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

    - Your roleplay scenario isn’t quite what I’d be looking for, I’m afraid.. If you could edit this, perhaps formatting it more like the example – using speech in quotation marks (”), and including some actions after, that would be fantastic! ❤️

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

     

    If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

    ❤️

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  3. Changed Status to Under Review

     

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    - Mm, your powergaming and metagaming definitions aren’t quite right,, if you could please correct these, that would be fantastic! Here are links to the correct definitions, just be sure to write them in your own words and not plagiarise! ❤️

    https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming
     https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

    https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

     

    If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

    ❤️

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

    - Ah, unfortunately your bio is just a teensy bit too short! If you could extend it please to at least 10 sentences, that would be wonderful! ❤️

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

     

    If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

    ❤️

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    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

    - Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed in the Pending message above! ❤️

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

     

    Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

    You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

    ❤️

     

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    - Mm, your powergaming definition is a little short, if you could perhaps expand upon this, it would be greatly appreciated. Here is a link to the correct definition, just be sure not to plagiarise! ❤️

    https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting
    https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

    - I’m afraid your bio is much too short, and doesn’t include any lore references,, do edit this to be at least 10 sentences long, and include a lore reference also! Here is a link to the wiki, you may find it helpful in looking for lore references! ❤️

    WIKI

    https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

    - Just to inform you, being an elf aged only 19 means that they are considered still a child in elven terms. While they are biologically an adult, because of the long lifespan of elves, they are typically considered children until the age of 50, and they have ‘passed their human years’ at the age of 100. It’s up to you whether you’d wish to edit this or not ❤️

     

    - Your physical description doesn’t really fit that of a high elf,, high elves don’t tend to have green hair and tanned skin. Adding onto this, I’m afraid your skin really doesn’t fit the server standard and theme, and doesn’t look particularly high elven either (modern clothing, green hair, tanned skin, rounded ears), please do change this! Here is a link to the LotC skin archive, where you can find skins that are free to use, reference from, or edit to fit your character, as well as several other links you may find useful! ❤️

    https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

    https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=High_Elves

     

    - Your personality traits and quirks are rather short and do not seem to include a negative personality trait, please do be sure to include one! ❤️

    - Your Roleplay Scenario is not quite what I’d be looking for, I’m afraid. If you could perhaps format it more like the example (using quotation marks around speech) and perhaps include some actions also, that would be fantastic! ❤️

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

     

    If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

    ❤️

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    Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

    - Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed in the Pending message above! ❤️

    Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

     

    Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

    You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

    Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

    ❤️

     

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    Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re doing great! So now, I welcome you to the wonderful community of LotC!

     

    Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [duckybreb#4385]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message puffables to find me in game. If I’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

    You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow CT members can help you that way!

    Lastly, here is the new player guide, I recommend you look over it!

    https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Guide

    Have a great time roleplaying, and I look forwards to seeing you around in future!

    ❤️

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

     

    - Ack, a lovely application, but it seems you’ve put your character name in the slot where your ign goes (the name of your Minecraft account ❤️)! ;;; if you’d be able to just fix the name of the post to be your ign, so that you can be whitelisted properly, would be much appreciated! ?

    - Also just to note, in case you didn't know (though I'm sure you do, evident by your roleplay scenario), your character cannot start out with any sort of magic, or much knowledge about it, as all magic must be learnt from teachers in game ❤️

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

     

    If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

    ❤️

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    Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

    - Mm, ‘LateSauros’ doesn’t sound particularly elven – one word with a capital letter in the middle,, Your character name doesn’t have to be your ign, or even similar to it. I’d suggest perhaps changing this to a more fitting name, perhaps making one up, using a fantasy name generator – or, perhaps even pulling something from the Ancient Elven Language? Here’s a good link, you might find it interesting when brainstorming name ideas! ❤️

     

    - Your Personality Traits/Quirks do not seem to contain a significant negative personality trait – please do correct this, and add one in! Unfortunately, I’d not really think that ‘preferring to be alone OR with friendly people’ or ‘He hates his enemies and hates alcohol’ are really significant negative personality traits;; Perhaps you could change or reword some, to make them so? ❤️

    - Your roleplay scenario is alright, but if you could perhaps format it more like the example (quotation marks around speech, etc), it would be much appreciated! Perhaps instead of using ‘...’, you could use an emote/action there, something to say that your character remained silent? For example; Character A’s gaze rested blankly upon the man, pursing his lips. He made no effort to respond, keeping a silent stare on him.

    Though, do be sure to write something yourself; that’s just an example, not something to copy directly ❤️

     

    You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

    Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message puffables! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at duckybreb#4385.

    If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WI

     

    If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the new player discord here : https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa

    ❤️

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