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  1. Aquaquean

    RonnieLodge

    Welcome to LOTC! As soon as this is posted you should be whitelisted on the server. Contact me or make a /creq in game if there’s any issues with this. If you’d like some help you’re always welcome to contact me or another Community Team Member. Also feel free to request a Wilven Monk to guide your character from Cloud Temple! A few resources you might find useful are the LotC Wiki, New Player Discord and New Player Guide. If you ever need help in the future you can also send me a message on discord. My account is Aqua#5363.
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    LakersWithHugeL

    Changed Status to Accepted
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    LakersWithHugeL

    Welcome to LOTC! As soon as this is posted you should be whitelisted on the server. Contact me or make a /creq in game if there’s any issues with this. If you’d like some help you’re always welcome to contact me or another Community Team Member. Also feel free to request a Wilven Monk to guide your character from Cloud Temple! A few resources you might find useful are the LotC Wiki, New Player Discord and New Player Guide. If you ever need help in the future you can also send me a message on discord. My account is Aqua#5363.
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    LakersWithHugeL

    Changed Status to Pending
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    LakersWithHugeL

    Changed Status to Under Review Unfortunately Middle Earth, Mordor & Hobbiton do not exist in the server’s lore. Lord of the Craft isn’t a Lord of the Ring’s roleplay server (despite the similarity in the names) – it’s set in its own world with unique lore and everything in your application has to be able to fit with this lore. You can always check out the server wiki for more information about the setting of LotC! Due to your character’s age and the way that time works on the server, they would have been born during the server’s current map/continent, ‘Arcas’, so be sure only to include references to places/nations that have existed on this continent. Also remember that hobbits are only referred to as ‘halflings’ on the server, not hobbits, so it would be best to change this in your application as well. You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance. Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.
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    RonnieLodge

    Changed Status to Pending
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    RonnieLodge

    Changed Status to Under Review Your Powergaming definition is incorrect and your Metagaming definition, though correct, is a little vague and could do with an example added to it. Please refer to our wiki page on powergaming to find LotC’s accepted definition (just remember not to plagiarise!). You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance. Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.
  8. Aquaquean

    Vented

    Changed Status to Accepted
  9. Aquaquean

    Vented

    Welcome to LOTC! As soon as this is posted you should be whitelisted on the server. Contact me or make a /creq in game if there’s any issues with this. If you’d like some help you’re always welcome to contact me or another Community Team Member. Also feel free to request a Wilven Monk to guide your character from Cloud Temple! A few resources you might find useful are the LotC Wiki, New Player Discord and New Player Guide. If you ever need help in the future you can also send me a message on discord. My account is Aqua#5363.
  10. Aquaquean

    Vented

    Your need to write your character’s response to the Roleplay Scenario from a third person point of view (e.g. using ‘he’ or ‘she’ rather than ‘I’) as this is what you are expected to use when roleplaying on the server. Make sure to check your grammar here as well. Remember that on the server you need to show, not tell – don’t say that your character has been on a long walk, try and show that your character is exhausted and worn out instead. This could be through actions/physical description or through dialogue (your character might ask the man how close the nearest inn is, for example). At the moment you just say that he is flustered from a long walk, but you need to change this because your roleplay responses must only include things that would be outwardly observable, rather than stating things that can’t be observed from an outside perspective. An outside perspective would not be able to tell that your character has been on a long walk just from looking at him, for example, but they would be able to see/observe that he is tired. You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance. Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.
  11. Aquaquean

    Vented

    The example that you used in your Powergaming definition isn’t quite correct. Remember that powergaming is forcing an action on someone else. There are some good examples of this in our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming, just keep in mind not to plagiarise. The Lore Reference that you’ve included in your character’s backstory isn’t plausible because, to my knowledge, the Country of Ayr existed more than a century ago in game, long before your character was born. Please search for places or events on the wiki that existed during the current map/continent that the server is set in, ‘Arcas’. Your response to the Roleplay Scenario should be written in third person (e.g. using ‘he’ or ‘she’ rather than ‘I’) as this is what you are expected to use when roleplaying on the server. Make sure to check your grammar here as well. You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance. Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.
  12. Aquaquean

    Vented

    Changed Status to Pending
  13. Aquaquean

    Vented

    Please try your best to correct the Spelling & Grammar across your application before you submit any changes. It doesn’t need to be perfect but it’s best if your application is as easy to read and understand as possible. The main issue is that you swap from first person (referring to your character as ‘I’) to third person (referring to your character as ‘he’) midway through your character’s backstory. Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are correct in essence but a little vague. Please add an example for each term. Remember you can refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated. You must include at least one valid server Lore Reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race, family, a date or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in, the religion they follow or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the LotC Wiki. Your response to the Roleplay Scenario needs some development. You have to describe at least one thing, such as the manner in which your character is speaking or an action. Look at the example scenario & question above on this page for a guide as to how this should look. You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance. Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.
  14. Aquaquean

    Vented

    Changed Status to Under Review
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    Gill_Hole

    Changed Status to Accepted
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    Gill_Hole

    Changed Status to Under Review Welcome to LOTC! As soon as this is posted you should be whitelisted on the server. Contact me or make a /creq in game if there’s any issues with this. If you’d like some help you’re always welcome to contact me or another Community Team Member. Also feel free to request a Wilven Monk to guide your character from Cloud Temple! A few resources you might find useful are the LotC Wiki, New Player Discord and New Player Guide. If you ever need help in the future you can also send me a message on discord. My account is Aqua#5363.
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    jessirabbitt

    Changed Status to Accepted
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    jessirabbitt

    Changed Status to Under Review Welcome to LOTC! As soon as this is posted you should be whitelisted on the server. Contact me or make a /creq in game if there’s any issues with this. If you’d like some help you’re always welcome to contact me or another Community Team Member. Also feel free to request a Wilven Monk to guide your character from Cloud Temple! A few resources you might find useful are the LotC Wiki, New Player Discord and New Player Guide. If you ever need help in the future you can also send me a message on discord. My account is Aqua#5363.
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    Mikekuwait

    Changed Status to Accepted
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    Mikekuwait

    Welcome to LOTC! As soon as this is posted you should be whitelisted on the server. Contact me or make a /creq in game if there’s any issues with this. If you’d like some help you’re always welcome to contact me or another Community Team Member. Also feel free to request a Wilven Monk to guide your character from Cloud Temple! A few resources you might find useful are the LotC Wiki, New Player Discord and New Player Guide. If you ever need help in the future you can also send me a message on discord. My account is Aqua#5363.
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    Mikekuwait

    Changed Status to Pending
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    Mikekuwait

    Changed Status to Under Review Unfortunately, Mount Thahn didn’t exist during your character’s lifetime. This location is from a previous map/continent of the server named ‘Athera’ that has been vacated for centuries of in-game time. Be sure to search for places or events on the wiki that existed near to the end of the previous map/continent of the server named ‘Atlas’ for places your character may have spent their childhood or from the current map, ‘Arcas’, for places that they may have lived or visited within the last decade or so. You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance. Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.
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    SilverDragonWolf

    Changed Status to Denied
  24. Aquaquean

    SilverDragonWolf

    You have failed to make the required changes within 24 hours. Please make the changes below in your next application. Please try to correct the Spelling & Grammar across your application before you submit any changes. It doesn’t need to be perfect but it’s best if your application is as easy to read and understand as possible. Your Powergaming definition is incorrect and your Metagaming definition has to include the definition of metagaming as well as just an example. Please refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated. Your response to the Roleplay Scenario shouldn’t include information such as your character’s thoughts or feeling, because this isn’t something people can see from an outside perspective. Instead of saying ‘and feeling comfortable I said’ you should change this to something along the lines of ‘he said in a more comfortable tone’. This indicates that your character is feeling comfortable but shows it in a way that other players’ characters would be able to see. Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever, my discord is Aqua#5363. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance. Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore. You may reapply at any time.
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    SilverDragonWolf

    Please try to correct the Spelling & Grammar across your application before you submit any changes. It doesn’t need to be perfect but it’s best if your application is as easy to read and understand as possible. Your Powergaming definition is incorrect and your Metagaming definition has to include the definition of metagaming as well as just an example. Please refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated. Your response to the Roleplay Scenario shouldn’t include information such as your character’s thoughts or feeling, because this isn’t something people can see from an outside perspective. Instead of saying ‘and feeling comfortable I said’ you should change this to something along the lines of ‘he said in a more comfortable tone’. This indicates that your character is feeling comfortable but shows it in a way that other players’ characters would be able to see. You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance. Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.
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