You have failed to make the required changes within 24 hours.
Please make the changes below in your next application.
Please try to correct the Spelling & Grammar across your application before you submit any changes. It doesn’t need to be perfect but it’s best if your application is as easy to read and understand as possible.
Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are incorrect. Please refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated.
Please refrain from using Clichés in your character’s backstory, such as their family being murdered by orcs. These backstories are overused on the server and it will make your character less interesting in roleplay.
Your backstory needs to include a piece of Server Lore (other than your character’s race, family, a date or one of the server’s maps).You could include the name of the city your character was born in, the religion they follow or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Check out the LotC Wiki to fix this.
Your character’s Name doesn’t really suit a dwarf. Unless there is a specific reason for why their name isn’t standard, please change it to something more stereotypically dwarven.
You must include at least one clear Flaw in your character’s personality traits/quirks. This can be any negative physical, psychological or social trait.
Most dwarves worship the Brathmordakin, a pantheon of gods who are prayed to in temples, not churches. While your character is by no means required to follow this religion, it would flesh them out a lot more if you specified which religion they follow as their piety seems to be one of their primary traits.
Your character’s Skin is incomplete and doesn’t really fit the part for a dwarf. I’d recommend that you check out the LotC Skin Archive for use and inspiration!
Your response to the Roleplay Scenario needs to include a description of at least one action, as well as the dialogue you’ve included.
Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever, my discord is Aqua#5363. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance.
Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.
You may reapply at any time.