Aquaquean

Changed Status to Denied

You have failed to make the required changes within 24 hours. Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever, my discord is Aqua#5363. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance. Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore. You may reapply at any time.

Changed Status to Denied

You have failed to make the required changes within 24 hours. Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever, my discord is Aqua#5363. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance. Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore. You may reapply at any time.

Changed Status to Denied

You have failed to make the required changes within 24 hours. Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever, my discord is Aqua#5363. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance. Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore. You may reapply at any time.

Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are incorrect. Please refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated. Your character cannot have lived in a treehouse in Agnarum because this nation’s city was underground. Also, Agnarum wasn’t established when your character was born. If you’re having trouble working out the server’s timeline and which cities they would have been able to come from, feel free to message me about it. Your response to the Roleplay Scenario should be written in third person (e.g. ‘he walked to the market’ rather than ‘I walked to the market’). Also make sure that you are using full sentences that make sense grammatically. You also can’t write what other characters are doing, only your own. This means that you shouldn’t be writing what the man is saying to you, only your own character’s response to it. You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance. Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions need to include the terms’ definitions as well as an example of what they could look like. Your metagaming example is good but neither of the terms have a definition at the moment. Please refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated. Your Powergaming definition does not match the server’s definition of powergaming. Please refer to our wiki page on powergaming to find LotC’s accepted definition (just remember not to plagiarise!). Your character’s Name needs to be a realistic medieval/fantasy sounding name, not your username. Try searching up Elven sounding names online to help you with this. Asulon didn’t exist during your character’s lifetime. It was a land that was inhabited a long time ago in game and has now been vacated for decades in terms of in game years. Because of this, your character could not have lived there. Lin’Evaral also didn’t exist during your character’s lifetime to my knowledge. Try searching for places on the wiki from the last map/continent of the server ‘Atlas’ for places your character may have visited as a child and places from the currently inhabited map ‘Arcas’ for places they may have visited in the last few decades. Make sure to describe what your character is doing/an action in the Roleplay Scenario and format your response by wrapping speech in speech marks (“ “). You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance. Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

Changed Status to Pending

Changed Status to Under Review Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are incorrect. Please refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated. You must include at least one valid server Lore Reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race, family, a date or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in, the religion they follow or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the LotC Wiki. Your character’s Background is too short. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them. To my knowledge, there have been no Elven Boarding Schools on the server, so this part of your backstory won’t align with the server’s history properly. Because of this, you’ll need to remove this part so that your character makes sense in the world. Your character Description should be written in full sentences. This field can be viewed by other players in game. You must include at least one clear Flaw in your character’s personality traits/quirks. This should be a trait which is significantly negative about them. Disliking people who stab you in the back isn’t a character flaw and is probably a healthy dislike to have. Make sure to describe what your character is doing/an action in your Roleplay Scenario and format your response by wrapping any speech in speech marks. You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance. Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

Changed Status to Accepted

Changed Status to Under Review Welcome to LOTC! As soon as this is posted you should be whitelisted on the server. Contact me or make a /creq in game if there’s any issues with this. If you’d like some help you’re always welcome to contact me or another Community Team Member. Also feel free to request a Wilven Monk to guide your character from Cloud Temple! A few resources you might find useful are the LotC Wiki, New Player Discord and New Player Guide. If you ever need help in the future you can also send me a message on discord. My account is Aqua#5363.

Changed Status to Pending

Your Powergaming and Metagaming definitions are incorrect. Please refer to our wiki page on metagaming and powergaming for the server’s accepted definitions, just keep in mind that plagiarism is not tolerated. Please refrain from using Clichés in your character’s backstory, such as their village being destroyed, unless you are referencing a specific example of a village that has been on the server in the past which was destroyed by a dragon. Villages on the server very rarely get destroyed like that and if something like that happened it would be an extremely big event which would be remembered. Since, to my knowledge, this has never happened on the server before, your character will struggle to fit into the world because their backstory won’t align with it’s history. Your character’s Background is too vague and doesn’t give a good enough outline of what your character is like, what skills they possess, etc. Please extend this to at least two decent sized paragraphs. You could include more information on things such as your character’s place of birth, upbringing, family, profession and any other important events that have happened to them. You must include at least one valid server Lore Reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race, family, a date or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in, the religion they follow or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the LotC Wiki. Your character Description should be written in full sentences. This field can be viewed by other players in game. Your response to the Roleplay Scenario could do with a bit more development. Try to think of what your character would realistically say in response to the man’s question. There are very few people who reveal everything about themselves and their backstory as their first words to a complete stranger. Perhaps your character would respond with suspicion or curiosity to the man’s queries, or ignore him completely. You also need to describe at least one action in your response and wrap your character’s speech in speech marks. Your character’s Appearance does not fit the server’s lore for mountain dwarves as mountain dwarves don’t have red eyes – please take a look at the wiki page on mountain dwarves before you submit any more changes. Also remember that the eye colour in your physical description needs to match your skin, which it doesn’t at the moment. You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance. Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

Changed Status to Under Review

Changed Status to Pending

In your character’s Backstory you say that the other dark elves don’t like the way he always wanders, however considering that dark elves are generally a very nomadic people this doesn’t really make sense with the server lore. The eyes on your character’s Skin don’t fit the typical eyes used on the server and makes it appear like your character is magic. Try toning down the colour just a bit and making sure they have white in them. The two standard looks for eyes used on LotC are like this and this. Otherwise your character will look very out of place on the server. If you’re having trouble finding one, feel free to check out the LotC Skin Archive for use and inspiration! Make sure to respond to the Roleplay Scenario in third-person rather than first-person! E.g. ‘he responded,’ instead of, ‘I responded’. You have 24 hours to make the edits above. Shoot me a message either here on the forums or on discord (my account is Aqua#5363) once you’ve edited your application. Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance. Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

Changed Status to Under Review

Changed Status to Denied

Denied by request of applicant. Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever, my discord is Aqua#5363. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance. Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore. You may reapply at any time.

Changed Status to Denied

You have failed to make the required changes within 24 hours. Please make the changes below in your next application. Your application is really good but you must include at least one valid server Lore Reference in your character biography (other than your character’s race, family, a date or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in, the religion they follow or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the LotC Wiki. Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever, my discord is Aqua#5363. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance. Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore. You may reapply at any time.

Changed Status to Pending

I’ve contacted you on discord regarding your application. Please try and reply within 24 hours. Please don’t hesitate to contact me or another Community Team member if you need help or have any questions whatsoever. You can also issue the /creq command on the server to place a ticket should you require assistance. Feel free to join our New Player Discord! You’ll also find the LotC Wiki helpful when searching for information on the server’s lore.

Changed Status to Under Review