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LillenaArdolflowrumm
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: PC Gamer
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you act upon outside source information, which is out of charecter and your charecter shouldnt know because they live in the game.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Is when you take over actions that anouther person is making, and make final decisions without giving the other person opportunity to respond.
    Status: Accepted

    It was 1638, a new year was on the horizon, it was the deep cold when my parents conceived me. Our people travelled onwards towards Atlas, a new land with new opportunity. Our homes had been scorched and drowned by the ancient curses which descended on our people from the mistakes of the first followers of Milan. My mother was a young forest dwarf, and my father, an older mountain dwarf. They met one night by chance on the battlefields of Avar. He used to say he fell in love with her the moment they met, and I was the product of true love. My parents lived a simple life, my father worked in the Kal’Akash mines, and my mother worked as a shopkeeper, selling gems within the city. The night I was born was as cold as Thonian mines, and so too my father's heart, as my mother died, bringing me into this world. From then on my father was my idol, I worshipped him as I do the Brathmordakin. The first ten years of my life were cheerful and well spent. Upon arriving in Atlas my father settled in Holm, amongst friends, the most notable, Onar Ireheart. We arrived and my father established a notable shop, home of many precious gems. His life’s work was collecting and selling gems to the people of Atlas. He found joy in his work and so raised me to find as much meaning in these gems, as himself. I spent the majority of my early years at home, tending to the shop and my father. I had very few friends, mostly I socialized with the children of the clients my father would sometimes have over. It was important to him to be as hospitable to these people, as people would come from far, to sell or buy from my father's shop. In the summer of 1648, my father was sent a large quantity of Thanhic ore. He spent many months working at the ore, trying to purify it. He created crystals and sold them to important people all over the land. His obsession with Thanhic came in the cold months. He began working long nights, and longer days. I would find him the bottom floor of our home, working away at the ore. His obsession with purification of the ore begun, he wanted a pure Thanhic Crystal, yet he always seemed to be left with a semi-purified result. This exposed him to dust, and shards. He began to loose his mind. The decrease in sanity came slowly, which made it harder to bare. The air quality below our home, was already bad, as fumes would seep in from below us. With my fathers work, the thanhic dust had started to accumulate in his space. The poisonous dust began to seep into his skin, entered his bloodstream. He died slowly, it took months of suffering. He was paralyzed and so far gone by the time he died, that he was unrecognizable. I could spend no more time doing the work that he loved, the work that killed him. Shortly after his death, an old colleague and friend of my fathers came Wuroz. He was shocked to hear of my fathers untimely death, and acted as a companion and friend during the years after his death. Wuroz acted as a brother to me, and so I repay him with companionship and kindness. Although I have sold the shop and moved, I still own the many valuable and rare gems of my father. I have a unique position in this place, as I mostly keep to myself and farm now, Wuroz and I are well-known, as we own the gems that once were world known, in the time of my father. In the present day, you can find me in my small home, farming, and enjoying my time with Wuroz in Holm.


Character Name: Lillena Ardolflo
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 49
Physical Description: Short in stature, tall in good looks. Lilena is a blue-eyed Dwarf with exceptional taste in wardrobe. She's about 4.3ft tall and has long amber hair.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello! Your application is very well written. I am pleased to see thought and effort put in behind your biography and your interesting facts. However, there are a few tweaks that need to be implemented before I can accept your application, those being as follows:

  1. Your character’s description is nicely thought out – however, mountain dwarves and forest dwarves have specific hair colors and eye colors. Your character description should fit one of these two – preferably the one that you are applying as. You can find this lore here on the Wiki
  2. Your skin is very nice, but does not match your character’s description. I highly suggest utilizing a skin editor and making some minor changes to your skin to better fit it to your character’s appearance. Alternatively, you can use the Skin Archive for help finding a skin to fit your character!
  3. Your interesting facts are great, but lack a weakness to them. This can be anything from a mental weakness such as an inability to cope with certain things to a physical weakness like the inability to fight or a weakened leg. Something that would affect their character to not be perfect.

Your application will be put on pending for the next 24 hours in order for you to submit tweaks. At the end of the 24 hours, if you have not submitted tweaks, your application will be moved to denied – but you will still be able to reapply immediately after! If you are in need of help, you are welcome to join the New Player Discord or join the server and talk to us in Wandering Soul chat. You can also submit an /atreq on the server itself and an AT will help you if you’re on the server itself. You are also more than welcome to speak to me on Discord in order to help with anything you need at all. My Discord tag is Sakura#8726. 

 

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Hello! I’m pleased to accept you to Lord of the Craft. Shortly you will be whitelisted and be able to play on the server at your leisure. Below are a list of helpful links to help get you started on your journey through the world of Lord of the Craft! If you are in need of help while on the server, you may do /atreq or contact me through Discord at Sakura#8726. The New Player Discord is also available to help you out. I look forward to seeing you on the server. Good luck!

 

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