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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Getting help with a issue with someone that isnt online. Example if you are getting attacked.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Trying to do something that the character wouldnt be able to do.
    Status: Accepted

 Anna 5’9.  Anna was born in the high power in Okam’thilln  ,  but her mother died and her dad kicked her out. She didn't have anything but she has worked herself back up the  be a high elf. She doesn't let her path get tp her that often but when it does she gets dark. She doesn't like when people see that side of her. She tries to hide that part of her. Anna has the brightest blue and sliver hair that has yet to be seen. Everyone knows Anna because of her very fair skin and how helpful she is. She doesn't let her being a high elf get to her. She tries her best to be better than her father. But at times Anna is seemed as a dark, cold person. Anna is the smartest high elf out of her family that she knows of. In the future she hopes that she can open a school so she can spread her wisdom to other elves in her city.  

Character Name: Anna Nicole
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 120
Physical Description: Anna is a shy, loving, young elf who is very honest, and very loyal to everyone, Anna is the elf that anyone can trust. Dark at times because the past
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Cornivore

Changed Status to Under Review

1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, but could use some help.

  1. The first two things that are obvious to me, is that you dont quite understand the definitions of Powergaming or Metagaming, I would request that you please fix them and if you need help the wiki can help. https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
  2. The second thing is your bio is a little too short for my liking, I would request that you please add onto it, maybe add a bit more lore into it if you could, if you need help heres the wikihttps://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
  3.  The third thing is that your interesting facts are not sentences they are just traits, could you make them into a sentence . 

 

(Also btw Elves are adults at 50 so 20 is quite young for an elf.) 

 

(You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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