Armanda_Salazar

Welcome! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft! My name is Skale and I'm going to be reviewing your application. I read over it and took some time to consider it and sorta take it apart. There is a lot of work to be done, but do not be discouraged. You are not denied, you will have a period of time to make various edits and changes to the application. Below you will find the necessary changes you must make to the application in order to be accepted:

• Both of your definitions are almost there, but not quite yet! Expand on them a bit more, if you would. You'll find the definitions in both are rules and online just by searching it, but make sure not to plagiarize!
• Your backstory requires at least 1-3 references to currently accepted lore on LotC. Shoot for one and you're good to go.
• While you can look like that and be a wood elf, I'd consider maybe being a high elf instead. They tend to be closer in appearance to your skin than wood elves.
• The age is definitely an issue as well. Elves tend to live to around 1,000 before dying. By that point in time, on our server, their mind starts to fall to madness due to the centuries of life and memories they've stored within their brain. Shoot for something on the younger side, but it should definitely be below 1,000.
• I would say add one fault. While it can be argued that "Not caring about someone else" is a fault, it's not something that's going to land you in a world of trouble. Add a little bit more, it'll definitely go a long way to creating depth in the character.

You have up to 24 hours to make the necessary edits to the application before it is denied. Below you will find some useful links for helping you fill out this application! I would definitely consider joining the LotC New Player Discord, even before you are accepted. It's filled to the brim with people who are more than willing to help you in anyway. If you require any assistance, don't be afraid to send me a private message!

High Elf Wiki: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=High_Elves

Wood Elf Wiki: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Wood_Elves

LotC New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You're almost there, just make a couple more changes and you're good to go!:

• The current capitol of the elves isn't Linandria at the moment. Not necessarily a bad thing, it shows you read the lore. If you can update it to at least the current city name, that's good enough for me.
• I still require at least one fault in your interesting facts section.

Take care of that and it's perfect, friend!

Since I wasn't around when you made the most recent set of edits, due to me being asleep, I'll extend this just a bit longer because you are almost there! All I require is:

• One lore reference! It can be anything to do with Atlas, really. Or any of the past maps!
• Elves aren't immortal in Lord of the Craft, as they are in Lord of the Rings! Just throwing that out there.

Good luck!

I'll add the reference tommorrow, sorry, busy night....

No problem! Take all the time you need! Just glad to have you here, friend!

is this good, because I can't add anything else

Thank you for your patience! After a few days and your edits, you've been accepted to Lord of the Craft! I appreciate your patience and diligence in this matter. You will be whitelisted and ready to play within the next few minutes. Keep in mind you can always reach out to myself or any other Application Team member during your time on the server if you require anything else. Thanks for joining our little corner of the world, and once again, welcome!

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