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Calenlasse_Greenleaf
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using informations outside of your characters life to use them as guideance and make your characters do something they'd not be able to do without that knowledge
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: act of any character doing something they'd realistically be unable to do.E.G Legolas shoots 5 arrows at the same time at Thorin killing him
    Status: Accepted

Calenlasse is a powerful Elf, studying the lore and history of the world. She is a good fighter, being able to use a bow and a sword well. She has Wood Elf in her blood since she dresses more in woodland style clothes. She has Black Hair and bright grey eyes. Calenlasse doesn't have many friends or family, she is alone. some people have asked her where and who her parents are but she doesn't know since she was raised by some Elves. the Elves told her, that her parents died leaving her in their care, she is unsure however. She has all the typical Elven traits. She has long and silky hair braided up at the back. she is quite tall. nearly 6'3 because her parents were really tall. Her ears are not long, but quite small and pointed. She also studied magic but doesn't know how to use it. she is quite Cold, and unloving. she doesn't allow anyone to get into her barriers she has created. She did have a sister, Aerin, but Aerin went missing when Calenlasse was no older than 70. This is why she became Cold, believing her Sister to have died. she doesn't care about anyone anymore. as she aged her hair got darker, turning black and her bright blue eyes changed bright grey. She has travelled around before settling by herself in the woods never having any contact with anyone. She does have a child, but the father is unknown. She is unable to have kids anymore. but she has a habit of adopting stray children if they wander into where she lives and they have no family. currently she has 2 children that she adopted, leaving her total at 3.


Character Name: Calenlasse
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 500
Physical Description: Long Black Hair braided up at the back. Robes and a Woodland style crown or Woodland Style Clothes.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Welcome! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft! My name is Skale and I'm going to be reviewing your application. I read over it and took some time to consider it and sorta take it apart. There is a lot of work to be done, but do not be discouraged. You are not denied, you will have a period of time to make various edits and changes to the application. Below you will find the necessary changes you must make to the application in order to be accepted:

  • Both of your definitions are almost there, but not quite yet! Expand on them a bit more, if you would. You'll find the definitions in both are rules and online just by searching it, but make sure not to plagiarize!
  • Your backstory requires at least 1-3 references to currently accepted lore on LotC. Shoot for one and you're good to go.
  • While you can look like that and be a wood elf, I'd consider maybe being a high elf instead. They tend to be closer in appearance to your skin than wood elves.
  • The age is definitely an issue as well. Elves tend to live to around 1,000 before dying. By that point in time, on our server, their mind starts to fall to madness due to the centuries of life and memories they've stored within their brain. Shoot for something on the younger side, but it should definitely be below 1,000.
  • I would say add one fault. While it can be argued that "Not caring about someone else" is a fault, it's not something that's going to land you in a world of trouble. Add a little bit more, it'll definitely go a long way to creating depth in the character.

You have up to 24 hours to make the necessary edits to the application before it is denied. Below you will find some useful links for helping you fill out this application! I would definitely consider joining the LotC New Player Discord, even before you are accepted. It's filled to the brim with people who are more than willing to help you in anyway. If you require any assistance, don't be afraid to send me a private message!

High Elf Wiki: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=High_Elves

 

Wood Elf Wiki: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Wood_Elves

 

LotC New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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You're almost there, just make a couple more changes and you're good to go!:

  • The current capitol of the elves isn't Linandria at the moment. Not necessarily a bad thing, it shows you read the lore. If you can update it to at least the current city name, that's good enough for me.
  • I still require at least one fault in your interesting facts section.

Take care of that and it's perfect, friend!

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Since I wasn't around when you made the most recent set of edits, due to me being asleep, I'll extend this just a bit longer because you are almost there! All I require is:

  • One lore reference! It can be anything to do with Atlas, really. Or any of the past maps!
  • Elves aren't immortal in Lord of the Craft, as they are in Lord of the Rings! Just throwing that out there.

Good luck!

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Thank you for your patience! After a few days and your edits, you've been accepted to Lord of the Craft! I appreciate your patience and diligence in this matter. You will be whitelisted and ready to play within the next few minutes. Keep in mind you can always reach out to myself or any other Application Team member during your time on the server if you require anything else. Thanks for joining our little corner of the world, and once again, welcome!

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