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Kolvar Vaven
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When you use knowledge that you character does not have to benefit your character. (like getting help from, a friend through /msg ect.)
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When you force something to happen to a player against their will. Mostly to benefit your character.
    Status: Accepted

     Kolvar Vaven was born in a small forest with very few Elves. Because of this he has always felt anti-social. His parents were never really around, so his seed had to raise him. With his parents never being there and eventually never coming back, Kolvar decided to run away from his home land. He spent a long time alone in a forest far from others. With all of this alone time, he learned many skills in the wilderness that he can use at any time to get him out of situations. 

 

     One day Kolvar was in the forest hunting some game, when he came across an old elf yelling for help at a near by creek. Kolvar rushed over to aid the elf in distress. When he reached the elf, he seen that the elf was very old (about 1500 years old). The elf was dying and he told Kolvar to come close so he could pass down his wisdom. The old elf told Kolvar that an elf's life is way too long to spend alone in a forest and that he should know because he spent his entire life alone and hated most of it. He went on to tell Kolvar that there was a place called Atlas and in Atlas was a civilization of elves called The Dominion of Malin. He told Kolvar he should go to this place and learn of the way of the elves and find a family that could make him happy.

 

     The old elf died a few hours after their conversation but the old elf's wise words lived on in Kolvar. Kolvar decided it was time to fight his hatred of being in social contact and move to this new land. He packed his things and made way for Atlas never to return to the place he had called home again.


Character Name: Kolvar Vaven
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 150
Physical Description: Kolvar vaven is a green eyed Elf, Who has Dirty Blonde hair. He wears a dark green tunic, Light green Leggings, Brown Gloves and
Brown shoes.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Your application has been placed on…

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You can not come from anywhere not in server lore, this dark forest you mention does not exist in roleplay, so he could not have grown up there and 'made for atlas'

 

I also suggest lowering the age of your character to something a bit more modest, as he would have lived through things you don't oocly know about and it might cause confusion. Just a suggestion however, not a requirement.

 

 

If any of the reasons I stated involve the wiki, this link will take you right to the home page, where you can find quick links to the metagaming and power emoting definitions, as well as look around to browse our server lore! WIKI

 

Being placed on Pending means that your application was solid, though there are still some issues present that need a bit of tweaking. You’ve got 24 hours to make them using the [Edit] feature of the forum. Whenever you make any changes, contact me and I will review the application once more. After 24 hours your app will either be Accepted or Denied. If Denial is the case, you will need to wait 3 hours before making another application.

 

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!


 

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Your application has been:

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On behalf of the Application Team, and LoTC as a whole, I’d like to welcome you to our community!

You will be implemented shortly, during this brief wait I implore you to visit our WIKI and continue reading up on server lore.

 

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!

 

Can’t wait to see you roleplaying!

 

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