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Elliazabeth


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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming means when the player uses the knowledge that he or she is aware of, but the player's character is not.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when another roleplayer forces an action during roleplay, but the roleplayer doesn't give anyone a chance to react to their emote.
    Status: Accepted

Alloralla Daeondra, a rich high elf woman, one of the most extraordinary in her family, her father tremendously wealthy as to her mother as well. She was raised in the city Haelun’or, in fact, she is pretentiously well known in her district. She has a large family indeed with 8 brothers as she is the second eldest and the most favoured due to her intelligence and her wellbeing. Even though she has lots of luck on her side, she has a great amount of pressure from her family to be the very best, because of this she can as well be a little sullen. A nice girl but a bit bratty at times, she hates talking to low-class well beings, so therefore she has a challenging time making new friends. Unfortunately, as a young child her brothers would taunt and her and laugh at her, because of this, Alloralla would have very low self-esteem, she would often feel alone most of the time, her family does not believe or practice in any religion, for they believe in the invisible deity. Being the favourite child Alloralla would often receive a lot of things, therefore making her spoiled by her parents. Most of the time, Alloralla would be paranoid about being kidnapped because of her status, so she would often have someone by her side. The one thing Alloralla take favour in the most would be playing the harp in her garden, her sweet melodies will often impress her father and mother, as well as guests that come over to visit the house. Nowadays, she is a very busy girl, helping her father with his work as well as her mother too, she continues her life to be a well known rich high elf that works about in her days in the city of Sutica!


Character Name: Alloralla Daeondra
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 126
Physical Description: A wealthy high elf female with pale blonde hair, as for her eyes they are as bright the sky, and her skin as pale as snow, she seems to be about 5'8.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello, Elizabeth! My name is Bluee and I’ll be handling your application. After reviewing your application, I’ve noticed a few discrepancies you have to fix within a 24 hour time period, but don’t fret! I’m here to help you every step of the way.  Please correct the following changes:

  • In your biography you mention you were raised in the High Elven city of Okarn’thilln on Atlas, however that is not possible if your character is a 125 years old. That means you would’ve been born on the start of Axios and in the High Elven city of Haelun’or. Please correct this so you were raised in the correct time period and city.
  • You must also include at least two lore facts from our wiki in your biography. You currently have one.
  • In your interesting facts you must have at least one negative trait, please correct this. Being picky about your love life isn’t necessarily negative.

Well that’s it! If you have any problems or questions whilst correcting your application you may contact me here on the forums or on my Discord at Talavok#3594. There’s also a handful of helpful folks in the New Player Discord whom are willing to help you. When you’re done you may contact me in the two previously mentioned methods or just leave a comment here. Best of luck!

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I’m pleased to inform you that your application has been Accepted! Congratulations!

If you need any help getting situated, you know how to reach me. Other than that, welcome to Lord of the Craft, now go out and shape your legacy!

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