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Helloimpeter612

By Helloimpeter612

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    Discord: PeterYTOfficial#6058
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming, often also referred to simply as 'Meta', is the use of information acquired out-of-character, in-character.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is the carrying out of unrealistic, unfair, or godly actions
    Status: Accepted

  

Peter is a Snow Elf born in 1715 and raised in Tahu’lareh, a city within the Fenn Nation. As a kid, he admired Ivae'fenn stood guard over the Snow Elven people. His parents were killed during the War of the Two Emperors, And because of his parents' death, he has a fear of losing those who is close to him. This led to him not liking to make a friend and So have to learn to raise himself. But while he was rasing himself he also learned how to fight by trainin with dummies with a wooden sword every day, in the end being able to hold his own against a medium sized boar. This training and observing the Ivae’Fenn kinda made him good at combat which led to him often help him understand the flow of battles better. Now at the age of 18, he is adventuring the world to train to get better at fighting.

Character Name: Peter
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Height :165cm
Eyes: Blue
Hair; blonde
weight: 59 kg
Roleplay Scenario:

“hey there Sir, what a lovely city, I was adventuring the world and see new stuff and trying to become stronger, 

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SoulReapingWolf

Changed Status to Under Review

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

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For the following reasons,

  • Your definitions on metagaming and powergaming are not quite right, I suggest checking our wiki on these terms and adding examples to show your understanding.
  • Your biography too short and has no lore mentions. In order to make it right, I suggest including at least 3 lore references and 10 complete sentences. (I’ll include a list of wiki pages you can use) You mention Lothlorien, Lord of The Craft is not based on the Lord of The Rings universe, please check out lore and make an appropriate biograhy. (The character art is cool but it’s not needed)
  • Your Description should include most of the facts you mentioned in the biography section. Please fix this.
  • Your traits/quirks should be complete sentences and follow the following format.
    • At least one positive trait: (Strenght, skill, achievement)
    • At least one neutral trait: (Hobby, lesser skill, interesting fact)
    • At least one negative trait: (Weakness, Fear, Flaw)
  • Your character art depicts lightning, I want you to know for sure that you can’t get in the server knowing magic, it’s something you learn through roleplay with a teacher.

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

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SoulReapingWolf

You are almost there!

However, you must make some slight changes.

  • You should add at least two complete sentences to your biography
  • I suggest your training starts out with training dummies and then maybe you take down a boar. (They are harder to hunt than most games say they are) This to avoid powergamey rp.
  • Your strenght is phrased in a way that seems a bit powergamey, you could word it in a way to say like, you are good in combat and can often understand the flow of battle.
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SoulReapingWolf

I am happy to inform you that you’ve been

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Your journey has only begun, adventure awaits in the lands of Arcas!

If you have any other questions feel free to message me through the forums or discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul)#1674, you can also join our New Player Discord, where you can talk and ask questions to other players from the server. If you have any doubts on how the server works make sure you use our New Player Guide! this guide is filled with tons of useful information to help you understand the server during your newcomer stage. Upon your arrival to Arcas, the monks from Cloud Temple will be there to guide you towards your desired destiny.

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