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JokerLow

By JokerLow

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming (MG) is the use of OOC information in the IC. The term MG is called "mix".
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming (PG) is forcing a person to take part in a RolePlay action without giving him the chance to respond.
    Status: Pending

Anvilaxe Hekkaes is a mountain dwarf borned in Kaz'Ulrah.

Also called "Gold Heart", Hekkaes was a wise dwarf but with a problem, even the little thing can bring him to a battle.

 

Unfortunately his mother died at the age of 4 years old.

No one knows who killed his mother, but he belives his father killed her.

His father was a harsh person, beating him and his little brother most of the times.

He grew in fear, but one time, at the age of 17, when he was alone he made a sword that was never seen before.

That sword could cut throught the hardest material with no hesitation.

One day, Hekkaes saw his father beating his little brother with a hammer. He couldn't stand and out of rage he stabbed his father with his own made sword.

Now the duty of a blacksmith and father was on Hekkaes's shoulders. Not much time after the incident, he fell in love with Throatiness.

The both shared the same feelings but one night when Hekkaes was ready to propose, some mercenaries busted in his village, killing everyone and burning every house.

Hekkaes ran towards his house to save his little brother, but unfortunately Thronotaine died.

He was full of rage, without thinking he went alone to the mercenaries camp.

Luckily his brother begged him to stop saying that this was a pure sentence to death for him.

Hekkaes kept having dreams with his father fallen in the hands of Khorvad and his beloved woman Throatiness in an unending plain filled with joy and other people.

Hekkaes wasn't a very religious person, but after those dreams he started beliving in Yemekar the one who forged our world.

That day, was the day when a new story began... 

Character Name: Anvilaxe Hekkaes
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Anvilaxe Hekkaes is a mountain dwarf with the heart of a sword. Loyalty is what defines him.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been placed on Pending. Please make the following changes.

 

-Try to think of something that's not of the stereotype 'orcs burned my village'.

-Add one (1) or more pieces of Lore from the Lore Subforum or the Wiki.

 

If you fail to make these changes in the span of twenty-four (24) hours from the time this reply is posted then your application will be automatically denied. If you have any questions you can direct them to me or you can direct them to the New Player Help Discord, where we have other Application Team members and General Helpers. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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26 minutes ago, Chorale_ said:

Under Review

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Your application has been placed on Pending. Please make the following changes.

 

-Try to think of something that's not of the stereotype 'orcs burned my village'.

-Add one (1) or more pieces of Lore from the Lore Subforum or the Wiki.

 

If you fail to make these changes in the span of twenty-four (24) hours from the time this reply is posted then your application will be automatically denied. If you have any questions you can direct them to me or you can direct them to the New Player Help Discord, where we have other Application Team members and General Helpers. Here's a link: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

Hello, thank you for that fast reply. 
I have edited my story, so I hope it's ok now.

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