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RalpLauren

By RalpLauren

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagamimg is using out of character knowledge in the game. For example a friend of you is in jail but your chracter doesnt know that, but you just happen to be walking outside the prison and 'hear' your friend yell so you bail him out
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powerplaying is making yourself the boss and deciding for others what is happening instead of fair game
    Status: Accepted

Yves-Saint Lauren, often called Yves or Lauran in short, was born in 1671. His father was a master mason who had a part in the building of Carolustadt in 1675-1680. Having seen how the big city where he lives 
has risen  from the ground and seeing his father help his country by building made Yves feel proud of his heritance, an older Batavian bloodline. Yves is homeschooled by a teacher and learned about politics and the history of the Empire while his father taught him to be a mason.After his schooling he started working in his fathers masonry to keep him company since his mother died shortly after Yves finished his school. Yves learned the trait of masonry which made him quite strong since it was hard work. A few years later his father died as well, (his parents were quite old when they got him as a baby). Yves´ parents had a good life and Yves has had a happy youth. But he decided that he wanted to be more than a mason in the empire. He wants power and pride, he wants to be known in the Empire. Being an only child he decided to sell the masonry and is now lookibg for  a diffrent career maybe in the politics or in the military

Character Name: Yves-Saint Lauren
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Yves-saint is a 6 feet long male human with short brown hair. He has a magnificent maintained moustache and bright blue eyes which are full of energy.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Cornivore

Changed Status to Under Review

1yPM0YR.png You are almost there, just a few things that need to be changed.

  1. So the first thing I notice is that your power game definition is off, it is not the correct version that I am looking for. If you need help heres the wiki https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

(You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord:  https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4

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