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LegendShine
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is using knowledge that your character doesn't know or can't use to get an advantage, like sending for help over discord.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when you don't give another player a choice in what happens to them, like: Mary swings the axe at the tree, causing it to fall and crush Mike's house and kill Mike.
    Status: Accepted

As a child, Thomas escaped from Bastion during the siege from the undead forces of Dragaar Lich Mordring, which was sent to destroy his birthplace, but lost his parents only nine years after his birth. (They died during the siege.) He was fostered by a kind couple who also escaped and took him in. When the thanium storm that consumed most of Axios came, they traveled with others to go to a new home, but got blown off course to Atlas where they lived in the wilderness for a while before they then went to live in Senntisten where he lives currently. He also was interested in Aspectism, specifically in the Emerald Way so he had left home to live with the Wood Elves for a few years. He came back to his home after 5 years and reunited with everyone he loved but was sad to see that his foster parents were slowly succumbing to the curse of the shortened lifespan. To make sure he lived his life to the fullest, he later went on a year long trip to Sultanate to learn their culture, however when he got back he was surprised to learn his foster parents had died from old age, because they were old, but not anywhere near dead in his mind, which now brings us to the present at 1661.


Character Name: Thomas Ironmoore
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 49
Physical Description: A dark haired and teal-eyed Heartlander, intellectual and carefree, but very serious.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Pending.

 

Your application has been place under pending for the following reasons - 

 

- The current year IRP is 1661, please make the needed edits regarding such

- Change your persona's age to match such as well unless you choose to change your character's year of birth

- How did his foster parents die?

- Include the transition from Axios to Atlas

- Add more detail in general if you can, it helps build a solid background for you persona

 

You'll have 24 hours to make the needed edits. If you have questions or need extra time, don't hesitate to message me and I'll be happy to help out.

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Accepted!

 

Welcome to LoTC, you'll be whitelisted soon enough! Until then, check out more of the lore which can be found on the forums or the wiki and see what builds there are on the server as a Wandering Soul. If you have questions, don't hesitate to contact me and I'll be happy to answer. Here's the link to the new player discord as well: https://discord.gg/jXC5SX7.

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