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Lil Wurm

LilWurm

By LilWurm

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other

60 years ago, in the city of Ruriksgrad. A little boy named Lorntheft shrieked and cried in horror as big, mysterious men carried away his father whilst his mother was out for the evening. Even after the figures left and his mother returned, Lorntheft lied there not saying a word. For 2 weeks, he stayed in his room only eating the food his mother brought to him. Throughout the rest of his life, Lorntheft was severely scarred. Nearly a decade later, the little boy matured into a man. This man had made quite a big discovery... Lorntheft had picked up fishing as his favorite hobby, this was most likely because when fishing, he wasn't expected to socialize with anyone. But one day at the docks after Lorntheft was through fishing, a man wondered up to him and asked Lorntheft why he was always at the docks, but never having a good time or talking with anyone around. Lorntheft kept walking and gave the man a few short responses. But eventually, the man grabbed Lorntheft and brought him to a nearby pub. This is where Lornthefts life changed... The man continued to order drinks for himself and Lorntheft. Needless to say, Lorntheft was plastered... He never wanted to leave this bar, so he didn't! At least for that night..... He woke up the next morning in the middle of one of Norlands thick, wild jungles. Even thought he was lost, he felt amazing! No hangover... No anything, he felt like the best he had ever felt in his life. He began to drink throughout the night until the next day of fishing for a few months, until eventually drinking all times of the day. Even 50 years later, Lorntheft can still be found drinking his days away, fishing in any body of water he just so happens to wake up next to...

Character Name: Lorntheft
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 63
Physical Description: An old, battered man. Wrinkles in his face run deep. A thick, full white-greyish beard hangs halfway down the his torso.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Farryn

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Hello there, Lil Wurm,

I am afraid that there are some edits that you need to make on your application. I have listed them below so that you can make the required changes. Be aware that you have 24 hours to make these application, otherwise your application will be denied.

 

Edits required:

  • Definitions: You need to explain why powergaming and metagaming are bad for roleplay in more depth instead of simply using speech to imply such. I suggest  using an example of powergaming and metagaming through the use of a roleplay scenario so that I know you understand these definitions clearly, along with an explanation of how it doesn't benefit RP.

 

Aside from that, you got the basics of the application down. Remember, you have 24 hours to make the requested changes on your application. When you are done with the edits, simply post a comment on your application and tag me through @farryn or by PMs - that way, I will know you have made the edits and want the application reviewed again.

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