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Neuronullah98
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: getting help from outside of the game
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: breaking of immersion, troll
    Status: Accepted

He is the everlasting hero of the setting, having appeared throughout the ages in a never ending line of incarnations. The various heroes who use the name are courageous young boys or teenagers who leave their homes to save the world from evil forces threatening it.

 

Over the course of his adventure, He defeats legions of evil monsters, explores vast lands, helps anyone he meets who is struggling, navigates deadly dungeons, and collects mythical items while pursuing his quest for justice and peace.


Character Name: Alsace Lorraine
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Male elf. A warrior who wields a deadly blade, with considerable knowledge in magic.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hi! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Although there are some changes you need to make, so don’t worry!

 

1; your definitions of powergaming and metagaming seem to be vague! please rewrite those, here’s a link for help: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming and https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

! do not plagariaze 

 

2: your biograpy is too short and does not refer to any lore ?

please change this and make two referrals to lore, here’s a link:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

! cities, history, magic and events count as lore

 

3: you cannot know magic when first starting, this has to be learned in roleplay first

 

4: are you sure your skin is male? just asking to be sure

 

5: one of your character facts must be negative ?

like ‘he is arrogant’ or ‘distrust humans’

 

Make sure you do them within 24 hours, or the app will be denied unless i am contacted!

 

Whenever you are done, or have any questions.  feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message ZachsSlayer or Zachs_! If i’m not around there, add me on discord at Zach#5794.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

While you wait, you can join the new player discord here :https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Hi Chaosgamer,

 

Thank you for your reply and I appreciate your feedback. I am going to revise my application below if that is ok.

  • (1) The definition of metagaming and powergaming :

                Metagaming is the behaviour to acuqire information or ask for help from the outside of the game. It is not only bad for the balance of the game but may also ruin the roleplay experience.

                Powergaming is the behaviour that undermines the experince of roleplay, by having characteristics that maximize the well of the protagonist without considering other players or the context of the game.

                (I can have examples, if the explainations above still are not enough)

  • (2) 

“He was born in a family in poverty on the land of Asul. His parents died when he was a child and he had no other choice but wandering around the island for survival. Fortunately, he was adopted by a small community of monkey-looking people and grew up. Since most of the people there are craftsmen, he was able to learn crafting and showed his talent in the field. He traveled to the realm of Arcas for in-depth skills of engineering and magic”

  • (3) It has been changed in the biography
  • (4) OwO … I believe it looks like a male, at least to me. 
  • (5) The negative fact would be “Due to his past, he’s self-confidence is below the average and he tends to be pessimistic about the future”

Thank you again for writing down the comment and I am looking forward to your reply.

 

Sincerely

Neuronullah98 

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Hi, you got accepted! Very exciting and good job on the app. I welcome you to the community of LotC!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [chaos#7283]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message chaosgamer_ to find me in game. If i’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /creq ingame and me or my fellow AT members can help you that way!

Lastly here is the new player guide, I recommend you look over it!
https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/179894-new-player-guide/?pagecomment1690465=1

I’ll see you out there!

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