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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: topg.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: in game use of knowledge the character at hand does not have or know
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: power gaming is to role play unjustly without considering the consequences and disturbs the roleplay in progress, and roleplaying so that you will always come on top.for example a knight that always defeats his opponent and never loses.
    Status: Accepted

She grew up in a small town a slightly less religious than others one with very few who knew their ancient ways but of those who did she did not know but her family was poor so she had to steal some food to survive and in the process she learned to wait and strike at the best moment.her father died when she was young in a house fire leaving her with her mother and only sister. later on her sister ending up leaving their new home and didnt come back a year passed and then someone came to our home and said that her sister was killed for her jewel necklace one of the few things our family had left from our last home. she left home at 16 and ended up joining a thief guild. but shes heard the name Metztli and on occasion when hear that name being told that its the name of their creator. on occasion she left the guilds base to visit her mother and give her some of the stuff she took from others to help her out so she could afford the stuff she needed to live.

 

 


Character Name: Kasriss
Character Race: KHARAJYR
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: Kasriss had a very dark coat of fur nearly black she wears a dress with red rims and orange inner fabric with a gold arm band and will wear a cloak
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Although there are some changes you need to make, so don’t worry!

 

Your powergaming definition is incorrect.

Try to make your three interesting facts into sentences, also one of them needs to be a weakness. A recommendation, attempt to avoid scaling ones IQ.

Make the character description only used for describing the characters skin.

Your bio is too short, and needs to have at least one lore reference.

 

Make sure you do them within 24 hours, or the app will be denied unless i am contacted!

 

Whenever you are done, or have any questions.  feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message ZachsSlayer! If i’m not around there, add me on discord at Zach#5794.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

 

While you wait, you can join the new player discord here :https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Hi, you got accepted! Very exciting and good job on the app. I welcome you to the community of LotC!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zach#5794]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ZachsSlayer to find me in game. If i’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /atreq ingame and me or my fellow AT members can help you that way!

I’ll see you out there!

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