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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: The act of using IC information found OOCly rather than ICly.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: The act of forcing your action upon someone else without giving them a chance to respond to your action.
    Status: Accepted

Charlotte grew up a farmer, and took pride in her knowledge of agriculture. She however always dreamed of being a great swordswoman, and trained by herself for years. Because of this training, it's how she developed her very muscular arms.  Eventually she did jogs. sit ups, et cetera everyday to develop her now muscular body. She's a very capable swordswoman at her age. She always manages to drive off bandits when they arrive to steal goods from the farm. But now she wants to aim higher, now she wants to try to become a hunter.

 

She followed the religion of The Church of Canon, and the place she lived was called the Kingdom of Renatus.

 

(( That is a short summary of her life. I don't want to reveal too much.


Character Name: Charlotte Vidia
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: You would see a young, muscular woman that stands at 5'7". She would be wearing a purple long-sleeved shirt, and pants. Her hair would be half shaven.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hey, your application is now;

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  • Your character facts could be expanded upon, I recommend things like how she became 'stronger than the average man', how she maintains that, how she became a capable sword user or why she's gentle 'til provoked.
  • Your characters backstory just needs a little work as it needs to include some of our servers lore. You can find the lore page for the Humans here - [Humans]. This could be things such as your characters place of birth, an event, religion, or a culture your character celebrates.

 

Note: You also don't need to worry about revealing things about your character in your application, no one's going to metagame this information and it helps you and us get an understanding of the character you're going to be playing.

 

Once you've made these changes, or if you need any help with them - feel free to contact me on discord (Hex#4689)

Or alternatively go to the New Player Discord @ https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Your application has now been;

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Welcome to LoTC. You'll be implemented shortly and be able to begin playing the server. While you wait I recommend you look through any wiki pages that catch your eye, or take another look at everything you may have already read.

 

Feel free to bring any questions you have to the New Player Discord linked above, or to me @Hex4689.

 

Best of luck.

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