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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metaing is when you see something in chat like " I have a hidder arcane dagger in my pocket. Your character does not know that but you do and you say that your character knows what he said.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Power gaming is when you use godly actions that your character can not do. Example: you stab someone and you say they instantly die.
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Lorenzo grew up in a city named “Kal’varoth” which is the capital of Urguan. He and his city are religious mountain dwarfs. Lorenzo worshiped the god of stone and earth. Every morning 9:00 to 11:00am he would pray and worship the gods high in the blue mountain skies with clouds surrounding him. Everyone in Urguan knew each other. But Lorenzo never really had any friends only his family. his parents were named Amelia, and Dawson. They didn't have a last name too.

 

In Lorenzo’s village there was no education for anyone in the village. He wanted a new place to go, so he set out for adventure and said his goodbye’s to his family and nobody else at the age of 15. So he set out into the woods and after a few miles he heard rustling in a tree. By the time he heard it he knew someone was following him, so he started to run  faster but the person who was following him was much faster and more agile.Lorenzo decided to stop and ask the person that was following him why he was following him.

 

The person didn’t respond only came down from his tree. Lorenzo could see that it was an orc. As soon and he could see that three more orcs came up behind him and stuffed Lorenzo in a body bag before he could act. Lorenzo woke up is a small hut with four orcs guarding him. But they were guarding him so that he wouldn't leave. Lorenzo got fed two times a day, the food was disgusting mashed up slightly cooked chicken. He had to stay in the hut eating food for no reason for 15 more years Lorenzo was raised by the nasty orcs until one day a goblin about ‘5,6’ came to the hut for a trade with the orcs. But the goblin set up the trade to save Lorenzo. The goblin took out all of the orc guard in a flash. It was all a bur to Lorenzo though. But the goblin unlocked the hut for Lorenzo and they escaped. The goblin didn’t say much from the hut. But he was whispering ever once in a while strange words Lorenzo under stood. After a dew days of walking Lorenzo could see a big castle in the distance.

 

The goblin finally spoke and he said welcome to Sutica. So we said our farewells and he gave me a small dagger for the road. After a few months of living in Sutica Lorenzo had gotten news that his parents had died from raiders that set the village on fire. This was sad knews for Lorenzo but he knew he had to move along, so he just lived with it.  So after he heard his parents have died. In 1745, the leader of Sutica, Mika Goldhand, was facing a coup from the citizens of Sutica. Lorenzo sided with the Goldhands during this but eventually lost the fight.  He now resides in the borders of Sutica.


Character Name: Lorenzo
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: Lorenzo is a forest dwarf standing 4'6"with ginger hair and scruffy face. He speaks with a low tone and walks with pride..
Roleplay Scenario:

“ *Jumps back a little bit* Hello,You frightened me there, you just came out of nowhere. But yes I’ve come to this city looking for good wealth and to start a new life here!”

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Ø Your powergaming definition is a tad basic and doesn’t fully convey the meaning, likewise with metagaming it’s part of it however it isn’t the full meaning, you can review our wiki page about them here!   

Ø Your biography also lacks a sufficient lore reference, this would be a city name (not nation name), an important world even that is relevant to your biography or a religion (HINT: The dwarves are very religious). Things that aren’t sufficient are races, nation names and cultures (Unless you’re going deep into that culture and demonstrating you know and learnt it well). Some places you can look for this information is our lovely wiki, some good pages include.

  • Urguan (This is the dwarf kingdom and nation on Arcas, you can find some of the relevant info here, or in their sub forum found here).
  • Dwarves (This is the general page for dwarf lore, you may be able to find something from here).
  • Forest Dwarves (This is the subrace you claim to be, more details could be found here, though I feel your skin more accurately represents a Mountain dwarf).

Ø Your persona’s traits and quirks while great, do contradict the dwarven curse, which is being greedy. While a dwarf can certainly be a kind person they cannot simply counteract the curse placed on them by Iblees. Please change this to more accurately fit a dwarf.

Ø As well, your roleplay scenario is a tad too short, would you able to maybe add an action or another set of dialogue?

 

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For reasons such as:

 

Ø Your powergaming definition is super duper close, you can review it on our wiki page  here!   

Ø Your biography also lacks a sufficient lore reference, this would be a city name (not nation name), an important world even that is relevant to your biography or a religion (HINT: The dwarves are very religious). Things that aren’t sufficient are races, nation names and cultures (Unless you’re going deep into that culture and demonstrating you know and learnt it well). Some places you can look for this information is our lovely wiki, some good pages include.

  • Urguan (This is the dwarf nation).

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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:

 

Ø Your powergaming definition is actually a definition of metagaming, you can review it on our wiki page here!   

Ø Your biography also lacks a sufficient lore reference, this would be a city name (not nation name), an important world even that is relevant to your biography or a religion that aren’t sufficient are races, nation names and cultures (Unless you’re going deep into that culture and demonstrating you know and learnt it well). Some places you can look for this information is our lovely wiki, some good pages include.

  • Urguan (This is the dwarf nation and contains the name of the city).

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, refer to it when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide Link will also help you

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

 
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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:

 

ONE LAST LIL THING

  • Urguan (This is the page of the dwarf nation and contains the name of the city, it is a city not a village and the city itself has a name that you can reference).

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, refer to it when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide Link will also help you

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

 
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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:

 

ONE LAST LIL THING

  • Kal'varoth (This is the name of the city, of which Urguan of the capital of).

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, refer to it when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide Link will also help you

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

 

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Feel free to browse the Wiki, and you can also join our New Player Discord, which is a wonderful place where you can ask questions to our various staff teams, meet other server players, and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! The new player discord is a great help in getting you situated into our server, Ask me on discord for a invite (Evonpire#0044) or the one in the message above. Check out our New Player Guide!

  

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