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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: pogo#3487
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metaing is when you see something in chat like " I have a hidder arcane dagger in my pocket. Your character does not know that but you do and you say that your character knows what he said.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Power gaming is when you use godly actions that your character can not do. Example: you stab someone and you say they instantly die.
    Status: Accepted

“ *Jumps back a little bit* Hello,You frightened me there, you just came out of nowhere. But yes I’ve come to this city looking for good wealth and to start a new life here!”

Character Name: Lorenzo
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: Lorenzo is a forest dwarf standing 4'6"with ginger hair and scruffy face. He speaks with a low tone and walks with pride..
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Evonpire

 

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:

 

Ø Your powergaming definition is a tad basic and doesn’t fully convey the meaning, likewise with metagaming it’s part of it however it isn’t the full meaning, you can review our wiki page about them here!   

Ø Your biography also lacks a sufficient lore reference, this would be a city name (not nation name), an important world even that is relevant to your biography or a religion (HINT: The dwarves are very religious). Things that aren’t sufficient are races, nation names and cultures (Unless you’re going deep into that culture and demonstrating you know and learnt it well). Some places you can look for this information is our lovely wiki, some good pages include.

  • Urguan (This is the dwarf kingdom and nation on Arcas, you can find some of the relevant info here, or in their sub forum found here).
  • Dwarves (This is the general page for dwarf lore, you may be able to find something from here).
  • Forest Dwarves (This is the subrace you claim to be, more details could be found here, though I feel your skin more accurately represents a Mountain dwarf).

Ø Your persona’s traits and quirks while great, do contradict the dwarven curse, which is being greedy. While a dwarf can certainly be a kind person they cannot simply counteract the curse placed on them by Iblees. Please change this to more accurately fit a dwarf.

Ø As well, your roleplay scenario is a tad too short, would you able to maybe add an action or another set of dialogue?

 

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, refer to it when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide Link will also help you

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

 

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Evonpire

Changed Status to Under Review

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:

 

Ø Your powergaming definition is super duper close, you can review it on our wiki page  here!   

Ø Your biography also lacks a sufficient lore reference, this would be a city name (not nation name), an important world even that is relevant to your biography or a religion (HINT: The dwarves are very religious). Things that aren’t sufficient are races, nation names and cultures (Unless you’re going deep into that culture and demonstrating you know and learnt it well). Some places you can look for this information is our lovely wiki, some good pages include.

  • Urguan (This is the dwarf nation).

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, refer to it when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide Link will also help you

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

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Evonpire

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:

 

Ø Your powergaming definition is actually a definition of metagaming, you can review it on our wiki page here!   

Ø Your biography also lacks a sufficient lore reference, this would be a city name (not nation name), an important world even that is relevant to your biography or a religion that aren’t sufficient are races, nation names and cultures (Unless you’re going deep into that culture and demonstrating you know and learnt it well). Some places you can look for this information is our lovely wiki, some good pages include.

  • Urguan (This is the dwarf nation and contains the name of the city).

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, refer to it when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide Link will also help you

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

 
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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:

 

ONE LAST LIL THING

  • Urguan (This is the page of the dwarf nation and contains the name of the city, it is a city not a village and the city itself has a name that you can reference).

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, refer to it when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide Link will also help you

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

 
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Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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For reasons such as:

 

ONE LAST LIL THING

  • Kal'varoth (This is the name of the city, of which Urguan of the capital of).

Your application was good, however there are just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, refer to it when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Community team, and meet other server players.  Taking a look at the new player guide Link will also help you

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044) or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game for any questions or concerns.

 

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Evonpire

Your application has been:


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On behalf of the server and Community Team members, I’d like to welcome you to LOTC! As soon as this is posted, you should be whitelisted onto the server. Contact me or make an /creq if there’s any issues with whitelisting or similar.

 

Feel free to browse the Wiki, and you can also join our New Player Discord, which is a wonderful place where you can ask questions to our various staff teams, meet other server players, and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! The new player discord is a great help in getting you situated into our server, Ask me on discord for a invite (Evonpire#0044) or the one in the message above. Check out our New Player Guide!

  

I hope you enjoy your time on the server, and if you ever have any questions or need help please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Evonpire#0044), or by /msg (Evonpire) in-game. Feel free to also contact me on discord (Evonpire#0044) if you need any sort of starter help.

OH! AND A FEW RESOURCES YA MIGHT WANNA LOOK AT!

 

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