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  • Rules: Yes
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you as a player use information in Rp, that your character wouldn't know.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Roleplaying an action that has consequences to other players that the other players, then role playing the outcome too the other players. Example in comments.(Sorry)
    Status: Accepted
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(Sorry in advance, I don't have a clue how to get it out of spoiler) 

Kavoc was just a bow when his parents decided on who he would marry. Ma'li, a daughter of a merchant close to his parents. Kavoc himself didn't mind her, they of course grew close in their years growing up, love blossomed. It was a rare tradition in , he himself was a bit taken back by it when he was first told. Ma'li and Kavoc spent many a fond moment together. In these years of their youth, Kavoc became an accomplished black smith and artist, finding a balance between beauty and deadliness only a dark elf could muster. it was in fact the time he smith ed his truest companion, Audron, a blade alloy of steel and gold, just enough to make it shimmer like summer's mourning sun.

These times came to a fateful end as he reached the youthful age of thirty. Just becoming an Artisan, in his craft, finally selling his first blade, he made his way to his to-be's mansion. When Kavoc arrived, it was in flames. He tried his damnedest to find Ma'li, managing to find only a charged corpse. He reached out, his hand in flame, though his torn mind did not care. He touched her face, one last time. Kavoc that day was marked forever, his right hand healed quite a bit in the coming months, though scarring ruined his once soft and finessed limb. 

After the long months of mourning, he set himself a new determination. To find the killer. This is when he learned most of his less lawful skills. He, of course, did most of the work himself, grieving did a strange thing to a man who had been such a sheltered optimist. He became determined. When Kavoc found a disagreement between his parent's and the merchant was to blame, he was further broken. this was, in truth, his final store. He had had enough of the damned sheltered life in Ker'nor. The other side of Axios wasn't far enough! And that is where we meet him, a black smith, once artist and skilled mercenary travelling across the elven plains of Axion, in search for a home. One with out the ancestors to tie him down. 

Note: some of the wiki was confusing or unclear, so I stuck with what I had. I am unsure mainly if the locations used are still relevant, but i cannot find the answer anywhere.


Character Name: Kavoc
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Kavoc has asymmetrically cut ink black hair, eyes of deep crimson, and toned navy skin. He, additionally wears a glove on his right hand due to burns.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Note: I am thinking of changing the hair, i don't really like how it falls, but maybe that's the point of it being unruly.

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Your application has been placed on…

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Your powergaming definition could use some work, consider taking a look at our power emoting page on the wiki, and perhaps include an example of what it is and why it's against the rules.

 

If any of the reasons I stated involve the wiki, this link will take you right to the home page, where you can find quick links to the metagaming and power emoting definitions, as well as look around to browse our server lore! WIKI

 

Being placed on Pending means that your application was solid, though there are still some issues present that need a bit of tweaking. You’ve got 24 hours to make them using the [Edit] feature of the forum. Whenever you make any changes, contact me and I will review the application once more. After 24 hours your app will either be Accepted or Denied. If Denial is the case, you will need to wait 3 hours before making another application.

 

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command.


 

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Example: Kavoc pulled back his bow's string back, his eye training on the Ma'li's head. He let it fly, hitting it's target's left eye, killing them instantly. 

 

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Your application has been accepted! Thank you for making the changes and I can’t wait to see you roleplaying!

 

For the new player discord, and all of my contact information, see above!

 

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