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RhythmrhymE

By RhythmrhymE

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Meta-gaming is using outside game knowledge to help you in the game, Example: when killing medusa you use a mirror.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Power-Gaming is when you don't give them a chance to decide what happens to them when say trying to cut off someone's head.
    Status: Pending

Frederick is a young hardworking Knight.  At the tender age of 23 he is doing anything he can to become the best guard.  He was just 20 years old when he decided to study to become a Mage, however, he could not find a wizard to teach him.  Out one-day adventuring with his close friend from the town of Axios, Frederick’s hometown. A group of Ogres came and attacked his friend by hitting him over the head with a mace, killing his closest friend.  Frederick then decides to try to locate the town of Renatus, after about two weeks he is able to locate the town.  Upon arrival he navigates his way to the inn, where he is going to stay for the time being.  Frederick needs to gather up Mina from the bounty’s so he has money to live on.  He tries to find a Wizard to train him and help him learn about magic but he has a hard time with that.  Frederick enjoys exploring when he is not looking for a mage school, yet, he cannot find one.

Character Name: Frederick
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: Frederick is knight with a steel armor and sword in hand, Frederick is a knight with a scar from fighting a ogre, and a scarf around his neck.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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TheIchorDruid

Application Pending!

 

Please make sure the following changes are made:

 

-Your character age does not fit in with where you once lived, Aegis was seven years ago which means your character should not live right now. Your character should be either from Axios or Atlas. 

-Your definitions of powergaming is incorrect and your metagaming definition is too vague.

-Try and keep your character from one place, it is alright to state he travels but including multiple places can cause confusion and common errors.

-Try and make your biography flow like a story, remember to check your spelling and punctuation.

-Do not use underscores within your Interesting facts.

-Please include more details with your character description.

-Dragons are not commonly around upon the server, so it would not make sense to receive a scar from one. 

 

You have 24 hours to make the following changes, please message me upon the forums when they have been made or if you have any questions regarding the application process.

 

 

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TheIchorDruid

Changes still need to be made:

 

Your biography does not flow, you do not need to put '(Registered Mentor)' when you mention looking for a mage mentor. Your biography should flow like this: "Grace is a rather lonesome girl whom finds befriending people quite the challenge, her birth place of Linandria did not help her case of finding lasting friendships due to her rather odd behavior. Though through her unique attributes, she found her time being well spent on studying literature" This is an example of how your biography should flow.

 

-Your metagaming definition is still incorrect.

 

Your time of 24 hours still remains.

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