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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: IC information given OOC'ly and acting like you know it after hearing
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When an action is done forcing something or being too powerful
    Status: Accepted

The story starts in Linandria, Axios. It's about a poor family with a young boy named Zaos Smite. Zaos and his family had to fight and steal for everything, but it always ended up being Zaos having to steal everything.  His parents would always tell him about when they lived in The Holy Princedom of Malinor. His mother and father were both 6 foot or taller and Zaos was a lot smaller, 5 foot 1 inches to be exact. Zaos was always taught to win his fight by his father and his father told him to always take care of number one (himself). Zaos' parents were both wanted for theft and more, eventually they were caught and executed. Zaos was only 17 at the time and learned how to take care of himself, he was getting smarter with slight of hand and more skills of survival. He no longer has family but soon after his family was executed he met a new friend, Thagig Krepo, Thagig was a goblin that was left behind from his family and was 16 when they first met. He slowly got more caring because of Thagig. Zaos and Thagig are still friends and they still take care of each other, they both steal from others to support themselves. Zaos still remembers the tales of The Holy Princedom of Malinor and wishes to go someday. He still acts like a big jerk, but is truly a good person.


Character Name: Zaos Smite
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 31
Physical Description: He'd have dark brown hair with a light stubble, a tiny but muscular build. He'd be 5 foot 1 inches and would have green tunic with a brown coat ontop.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Pending.

 

Your application has been placed under pending for the following reasons - 

 

- Vailor was more than a century before the Descendents moved to Atlas, please make the needed edits.

- Add more references to the lore

- What makes him smart?

- Add some personality traits, helps build a solid character

 

You'll have 24 hours to make the needed edits. If you have questions, feel free to let me know and I'll be happy to help out!

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Accepted!

 

Welcome to LoTC, you'll be whitelisted soon enough! Until then, check out more of the lore which can be found on the forums or the wiki and see what builds there are on the server as a Wandering Soul. If you have questions, don't hesitate to contact me and I'll be happy to answer. Here's the link to the new player discord as well: https://discord.gg/jXC5SX7. 

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