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SeaStarGames

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using outside knowledge to determine things that the character should not or would not know other wise.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Forcing an other players into an action that they do not approve of.
    Status: Accepted

Yukimura is  what others would consider as a halfling because of her appearance. She ages as any other human would but she is born with white hair and almost glowing golden eyes. The City folk of Haense, not knowing her origins, paid no mind to her appearance and instead waited to see what she would become. As years went by, the old couple who had adopted her noticed how she didnt seem to connect or even remotely care about the people around her. They would describe her as having no emotion. Cuts and bruises she would get from hunting and helping around the house didnt ever seem to bother her ether. Unfortunately, someone had already noticed this. Not long after the fact, someone took the opportunaty of hireing someone who would do what their bitting without regret. During the past 15 years of her life she had grown quite fond of her caretakers and accepted to leave if it would have given them a chance to live a while longer. Thats where her assasin career started. The people who had hired her seeked power and thought they could get it if they had a way to install fear into those who objected. From there that became her job, her only reason to be. She didnt care but before soon she got tired of them. After killing, torturing and taking care of the organisations targets for a year, she gained a thirst for blood. With them not needing her anymore and all of those images in her mind, she went on a rampage. killing almost everyone in the lower and higher ranks of the organisation and then running away from the town that had grown to fear her. She now takes jobs from whomever needed something done and camps out where ever she finds a safe place for the night.

Character Name: Yukimura
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: She has long white hair, golden/yellow eyes and white porcelain skin.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Dromui

Changed Status to Under Review

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Upon review, your application has been placed onto Pending. Do not fear, you are not denied! You have up to 24 hours to make the necessary changes to the application in order to be accepted. If you require any help during this process you are welcome to contact myself or another member of the Application Team. We are here to help you get on the server after all! The application was close, but not quite there. Below, you will find the necessary edits you must make in order to be accepted!

  • Your definition of metagaming is incorrect. Just take another look at the rules, change it up, and you'll be good to go.
  • It is not possible for your character to not feel pain. Edit that out and a fault to your Interesting Facts section in place of it and you'll be good to go.

Aside from that, you're good to go! I would recommend taking a look at our LotC New Player Discord as well, considering it is full of hardworking players, both new and old, seeking to help you get accepted and find your place on the server.

 

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Dromui

Took a look at the edit! As I said, your character has to feel pain as it comes. She is a normal creature, pain is a normal part of life.

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Upon further review, you have been accepted! Welcome to Lord of the Craft! If you require any help in the future don't be afraid to throw me or any other member of the Application Team a message. I hope to see you on the server and enjoy the roleplay, friend!

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