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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using information that your character could not know to your advantage, or using OOC information in RP.(Calling out someones name in RP even though you've never met them, because sometimes it says character name on the top)
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: The act of forcing an action upon another player (*Yamane swings his sword at Ben instantly killing him*)
    Status: Accepted

No one really knows where Yamane Ishikawa is from, not even himself. He was adopted by the Ishikawa clan after one of its samurai found the baby in the forest, while on one of his missions. The clan took him in as one of their own. He was raised as one of their own, living with the samurai that found him. He was a healthy child, and at the age of 3 the samurai saw the potential in him and began training him in the ways of the Bushido and battle until he was 15. At 15, Yamane and his adoptive father went into their first battle. One of the houses of the region were being robbed and some villagers alerted the samurai. Yamane and his father both fought well, but his father ended up being killed by a robber from behind, Yamane killed the robber shortly after. But after the death of his adoptive father, the clan did not want to take Yamane back, since his father was the only person that wanted to take him in. Shortly after he was exiled from the town, and on his way out another villager spat on him, just because he was cast out of the clan, and out of anger Yamane killed him. Yamane decided to drop the Ishikawa clan name, because they had abandoned him, and decided to go by Yamane Shokan, which means redemption in his native language, because Yamane hopes to become one day, a real samurai. Yamane left Oyashima in fear of retaliation from the clan and made way for the realm of Atlas. Yamane had no money for transportation, thus forcing himself to sell his katana. After a few years he made his way to Atlas, wandering the realm. Presently he wanders around the realm looking for any work, and a new katana, hoping to be able to afford a stable life in a city.


Character Name: Yamane Shokan
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Tall around 6'0, slim but athletic, green eyes, short brown hair, white skin
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Your application has been placed on…

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You seem to use lore from feudal japan.Japan never existed on lotc, though there are asian-esque peoples, known as farfolk. I suggest reading up on their lore, also: he can not have come from any land other than Atlas, because of his age. We've been on atlas for over 20 years.

You need to reference our lore specifically, it can't just be vaguely mentioning Atlas.

 

If any of the reasons I stated involve the wiki, this link will take you right to the home page, where you can find quick links to the metagaming and power emoting definitions, as well as look around to browse our server lore! WIKI

 

Being placed on Pending means that your application was solid, though there are still some issues present that need a bit of tweaking. You’ve got 24 hours to make them using the [Edit] feature of the forum. Whenever you make any changes, contact me and I will review the application once more. After 24 hours your app will either be Accepted or Denied.

 

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!


 

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Your application has been:

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On behalf of the Application Team, and LoTC as a whole, I’d like to welcome you to our community!

You will be implemented shortly, during this brief wait I implore you to visit our WIKI and continue reading up on server lore.

 

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!

 

Can’t wait to see you roleplaying!

 

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