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Theldryn


theldryn
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using sources outside of minecraft (Discord)
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: forcing emotes upon a player.
    Status: Accepted

Kuvira was born in the wild, he never knew is father or mother for they died in the wild after he was born. When he was 7 years in the wild he finally decided to go West. Making him come upon Belvitz, Telmarill 'The white smith’ Azaghul. Telmarill took him in like his own son. Since Telmarill was a smith, Kuvira watched him often performing his trade helping him where needed. He always wanted to improve his smithing. When Atlas was destroyed, he moved to Arcas with his brother. On Arcas he didn't have much of a connection to his brother for they have been apart for almost all of their life. In year 16 he began fighting, he got a style like a southpaw boxer. He will weave between hits, seeking an appurtunity to strike. He likes the colour of green.


Character Name: Kuvira
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Tall, black hair, green eyes, small black dot under his right eye. thin posture.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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1yPM0YR.png you are almost there but you could use some help.

  1. Your interesting facts are not really anything they are just two words, I would request you please make them into sentences, and follow the format with, one good fact, one in the middle, and then one thats a negative like cannot speak.

(You have 24 hours to fix these few changes, until it is automatically denied, unless you are actively working on it.) If you ever require assistance feel free to privately message me on the forums, or in the discord. Cornivore#8461 Also feel free to join the public server discord: https://discord.gg/4W6GXP4 You can also join the New Player discord for extra help: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw https://imgur.com/jAPlD7R 

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