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Raldor
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When your character says/does something based off of something that the character would not know about. ex: Your friend warns you about some group planning to raid your village or something over skype, and then your character goes and warns others in game
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When you overpower someone elses character without giving them any chance of resistance, such as saying you cut out their tongue. While you should say you make an attempt to cut out their tongue
    Status: Accepted

Now retired, Raldor live a long life (by Raevir standard) more or less in peace. Born into a strelt family, Raldor spent his childhood working on a farm with his father and brothers. Later in life, while visiting Haense for fresh supplies, he noticed a recruiting poster for the Hearth Guard, and decided to try and join. And he succeeded. Everything was fine, he did a good job at his job. Kept the peace, everything was groovy. He would return to his family home at the end of every harvest year after year, and once he even brought someone else with him. Sindra, the woman he fell in love with and later wed. Times were happy between the two, Raldor kept working for the guard, over time they saved enough to buy a small little home by a river. They tried and failed for years to bear a child. They eventually succeeded, a beautiful son named Shevek (named after Sindra's father), but they weren't able to celebrate, for Sindra died during childbirth. Raldor tried to raise his son to the best of his ability, Shevek was a gifted child, and Raldor felt shame for not being able to give him a proper education. For he never received one and could not afford to give his son one. He later overheard a traveler talking about the Academy of Holm, and how it was free to all in pursuit of knowledge. Raldor knew this was the chance for his son to reach his full potential. So Yeah, he helped his son with the travel to the academy. He wished his son the best of luck, and left him. Returning home, Raldor continued working for the guard, until eventually retiring at the age of ripe ol age of 60. He now spends his days fishing at the river near his house, just waiting until it is the end of the harvest in order to see his son again.


Character Name: Raldor Kedrig
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 63
Physical Description: An old man, balding with a brown beard, 5'9, usually seen with a fishing pole in hand. Might be seen with reading glasses on.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hi! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Although there are some changes you need to make, so don't worry!

 

 

Your powergaming definition is close, but it should be changed to fit more as it is not totally correct or doesn't show me that you really know what it means.

 

One of your interesting facts needs to be a weakness as well!

 

 

Whenever you are done, or have any questions. feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message ZachsSlayer! If im not around there, add me on discord at Zach#5794.

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Hi, you got accepted! Very exciting and good job on the app. I welcome you to the community of LotC!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zach#5794]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ZachsSlayer to find me in game. If i’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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