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VernonRoche
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming means you act as if your character knows an information, while he normally can't have knowledge about it.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Forcing some states, like for example implying my character took control of 2 people, not giving the choice to the other players. Status: Denied
    Status: Accepted

Once Asurius, everything was lost that day, the day when Talonii Hollow was razed. Asurius and Abadon meant respectively enlighted one and moonlight child. Being a children from an eminent member of the Dark Trinity, Asurius had many privileges as a young elf, being granted special training in politics, music and combat, together with his brother Abadon. Most of the people living in the district saw them as twins, having only different hair color, although their characters were opposite just like the sun is to the moon. Asurius was a considerate person, being determined to ascend in the ranks of the Dark Trinity and making a radical change to the ills his people was living. He was the favourite student of Malofex, a high priest of the ancestors in his time, having enormous potential in influencing people with his arguments. On his birth he was blind, but his father brought him in a place where a mysterious man gave him back vision, for a price none may know, keeping however the pale color of a dead eye. On the other side, Abadon had the same ambitions as his twin brother, but in comparison to him, he viewed the dark elves as the supreme race, bred to lead the elven people and eradicating the human plague. He often traveled to Krugmar in order to learn the secrets of the orcs and how they fought, meeting there a dark elf. His name was Altyris, member of a cult unkown to him. Abadon's boiling ambition soon led him to his downfall. Altyris shared his knowledge about the dark arts which would allow him one day to overthrow the Dark Trinity, and returned to Talonii Hollow, where he would stay with his brother. He told Asurius the adventures he lived, the people he met and what he learn from Altyris. Hearing those twisted words from his own brother the twins were divided for ever. At least that's what they thought. The Black Scourge's attack was conducted with such force that the elves would try any means to stop this bloodshed. The brothers, fighting together with their father managed to fend off the attackers for some time but were soon overwhelmed. Fires burning high and corpses flooding the streets were what Abadon was watching, and among those dead elves, his brother lying on top of them, his arms turned into a grotesque bloody thing. His father was fighting among the last leading members of the Trinity when the final blow was announced. Losing all hope, he carried his brother's body among the amassment of destruction, reaching what was once their home, now a ruin of disaster. The last thing he saw was his mentor Altyris, standing tall in dark flames, his pale eyes glittering in all the chaos surrounding. Asurius woke up in a silent place, only the sound of death would fill this emptyness. The door of his home, which once used to be a place of happiness was now a memory of the past, never to be seen again, for his brother was dead before his eyes. However, he saw everything. Noone will ever know what was behind the twisted mind of Altyris and why or how Asurius was saved. A scar on his back would remind him each day his now sacred duty. He wanted now to take revenge on the destruction that befelt his home, destroying anyone in his path towards finding Altyris. A sudden blind rage took over him, he took his brother's name with him, to strike fear in those working for Altyris. He was now Asurius Abadon, the enlightened moonchild.


Character Name: Asurius Abadon
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 360
Physical Description: A bit taller than usual, with pale eyes and burned hands. He wears black robes, a hood and a mask.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

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"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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The guilds Dark Trinity, Crimson Dawn, and ect never existed in our lore, if you wish to keep this backstory you'll need to pull from groups that actually did exist.

His eyes would not have turned milky white from their original color/

 

 

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If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!

 

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