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WhyElar

By WhyElar

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When you use information about another topic from outside the role play Ex. *reads player info* "So you are 18? and a Heartlander?
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When you use an action and give the other player no chance to respond
    Status: Accepted

Originally from Fensen, Adrien has traveled from town to town, city to city in hopes to find the perfect settlement. When he falls into the region of Marna, he can't help but to find work and start his life. Looking for work as a guard, or a position in the army is easy enough, but moving up... that's the hard part. Yes, he has the strength, but not the balance or correct tactics to use his powerful blows. He must be taught and trained, so he is on his way to find work in that region. 

 

His family is pretty massive, he has six brothers and one sister. His mother was killed in cold blood by her brother, leaving Adrien's father to remarry. Along with this remarriage, came two step-siblings (two boys), and one half-sister. Over the years, his strength developed and formed because of all the fights he'd have with his brothers. They'd force him into 'tournaments' where they'd beat him every time. He'd start to then win some, turning the tables around, and'd he'd beat his brothers. He started using spider silk to make strong clothing to last the brutal fights between his brothers and him.

 

 

 

 

Character Name: Adrien Fern
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: His short light brown hair plumps into a sort of bob on his head, his eyes a sort of grey-ish tone.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Callistus

Changed Status to Under Review

 

Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft!

Your application is…

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- Your definition of metagaming are correct, but I advise you to clarify further. Examples would do the job!

- You must include one weakness among the three interesting facts about your character.

- Your character may not have double the strength of a human without some sort of magic. So you'll have to remove that part from the interesting facts. He can be strong, but twice the strength is an exaggeration.

- There is no witch magic that can cast such curses for now, so it is out of lore. Therefore you'll have to remove the curses part. You could replace them with allergies if you wish.

*Failure to make any changes within 24 hours will result in a denial.

 

Fret not! You should be good upon making the aforementioned changes.

 

Apart from these, you are set! If you have any questions, feel free to message me on the forums, ingame (By typing /msg Boruto) or on Discord @Callisto#6280

You could request a ticket ingame for help at anytime using the command /atrequest or you could toss your questions on the ingame chat!

If you need any help, I suggest you join our new players' discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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Callistus

 

Your application has been...

 

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Congratulations! On behalf of the Application Team & this lovely community, I'd like to welcome you to the vast realm of Atlas!

You will be whitelisted & implemented onto the server shortly.

For the meanwhile, I'd encourage you to check out our Wiki and acquaint yourself with our expansive, lore rich world!



 

If you have any questions, you could message me on the forums, ingame (By typing /msg Boruto) or Discord @Callisto#6280

You could request a ticket ingame for help at anytime using the command /atrequest or you could toss your questions on the chat!

If you need any help, I suggest you to join our new players' discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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