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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: its a form of cheating by using information that you know that your character shouldn't know
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: progressing through steps and processes linearly
    Status: Accepted

Dan Brun is an elvish archer prodigy. Growing up in Aegrothond, he was able to dedicate most of his time hunting with his now deceased father in the woods, practicing every night in the woods. At the relatively young age of 45, Dan has developed his archery skills enough to gain favor over his mothers other 56 offspring.

 

Due to his great feats he caught the attention of a secret guild of archers. This guild was known, and got its name for their ( what some would call mystical) arrows leaving a blue flames in each of their targets. Most of this guild worked in secret, but Dan was proud that he was accepted at such a young age. So he decide to wear the blue flame crest wherever he traveled.


Character Name: Dan Brun
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 45
Physical Description: Short brown hair, parted toward the right. I have sky blue eyes, and a crest of the blue flame on the chest piece of my tunic.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hey! So first i’ll just like to say you’ve done well with your application, though I do have to put you on halt for a few reasons, these will be reared to your biography mostly. 

 

  1. Your biography does have to be at least two paragraphs, I would like to see some backstory to your character and how he became a grand archer.
  2. I would like if you could remove the part of “respected by other elvish archers at much greater ages.” and change it to “respected by his mother, proud of the elf Dan has become”. Or something along those lines.
  3. Although the insignia on your skin (blue flame) is on your chest and hand, if you could integrate what this hunters guild is in your bio it’ll give me some representation of your character. 

 

Thank you, you’ll have 24 hours to fix up your application. You can message me for help by replying to this thread, PM’ing me or find me on discord here: “Jenny_Bobbs#0001” otherwise you can speak to other members of the community here: https://discord.gg/XQaSVK

 

Enjoy your day!

Jenny.

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I made the changes! :). I loved the idea that his mother was the only one proud of him. Thanks, I really feel that it made his story feel more realistic.

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I’m accepting you since you made the correct changes to your application. ALTHOUGH I want you to NOT roleplay you or your arrows having mystical properties as you referred your guild to of had, you cannot RP blue flames unless you have done so within the game with correct forging and making of the device.

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