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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: doing something you can't do inside of the game example = texting for help
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: emoting in a overpowered way
    Status: Denied

neth has been exiled from home since he was 100 years old for killing 7 other elves(because he was angered). he was born with the ability to use every arcane magic. he always has two swords with him that are enchanted randomly every time they are drawn, but when neth draws these swords he can't use magic for the rest of the day and the enchants on the swords last for the rest of the day. neth is somewhat physically weak until he draws his swords. he also has a very chaotic aura when he is angered. always challenges every elf to a battle to the death respectfully.


Character Name: neth
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 200
Physical Description: long silver white/light blonde hair. blue eyes. about the size of an adult human. about 120 lbs. light skin. slim.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

T4JBJW3.png You are almost there, only a few things left to fix. (Please fix the following in 24 hours.)

I. Your Biography is lacking server lore in it, I would please request that you add some. Here is the wiki for help: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

II. Your persona is already seeming to be overpowered, I do not believe that you could actually kill 7 elves at once, seems a little to Powergamey to me.

III. Your persona is starting with magic which is not allowed, you must learn it In character in game, Magic already knowing is actually not allowed in the bio, which is in the rules of applying.

IV. If you need any help feel free to contact me, In game, on the Forums, or In New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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