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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Adopted....
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: never control another players character, remember my characters limits. plus losing can always benefit rp
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: metagaming ruins immersion and gives my character knowledge of things they shouldn't know
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Billy Boggins
Character Race: Goblin
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: green skin, red eyes. white hair, cloth clothing 4 feet tall 100 pounds
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

 

“I was born in the tunnels beneath Orcish war-camps, just another small goblin among stronger Uruks and Ologs.”
“I was never meant for glory, only for carrying supplies, tending fires, and doing the quiet work others forget.”
“When the war-bands marched, I marched too, hauling crates and cleaning up after battles that were never mine.”
“One season heavy rain ruined the wagons I was guiding, and I wandered through the marsh until I reached this town.”
“I am only a goblin looking for steady coin and a dry place to sleep.”
“So here I sit before you, just tired and hoping for simple peace.”

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your roleplay scenario! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc.
  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!  When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person! Example: Judy stomps her foot on the ground. “How dare you!” she screams.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use Magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @cheese1sgrater to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

 

My discord is @cheese1sgrater if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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