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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: not acting in the role youre assiged. Having knowledge on something your character should not have
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: someone demanding an affect on another character.
    Status: Denied

His farther (Amanndil) and mother (Hurriel) lived in the Citidal of the Snow elves . Back in the times where snow elves were more sociable to other races his mother was visiting a good friend of the family in the forest dwarves region. A hafling (tinsbun), a well known trader. on her way back his  Mother was ambushed and murdered by a band of Gundabad wargs near the grasslands of the forest dwarves. His farther being a high commander in the military and close relations to the high priestess demanded to sweep the eastern lands of all wargs and orcs. His son (Fin mer) of course being brought up on a militaristic childhood and warrior blood in his veins wanted to fight alongside his farther. The high General did not agree to this and marched out with his elite army behind him, leaving his son to dwell into deeper, more darker arts. The son took a worrying interest in the knowledge and power of their cousins, the dark elves. Their power intrigued him and their highly dangerous reputation impressed him. He sought to find more about them and harness their power and knowledge for his own. The general came back with his army victorious, depriving the land with any dark creature, earning himself an outstanding reputation. Greeting his son, he is petrified of his discovery of his sons obsession for power. He retired and brought his son along with him outside the citidal into a barren land on the edge of the snow elves region. He wanted no one to know the status of his son and tried to reason with him and end this madness. His son was already too far gone and murdered his own farther in is sleep. With the Snow elves thinking the respected general died of age, they now look to the son to take his place. Now he travels the world, seeking more power and knowledge of this dark origin


Character Name: Fin mir
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 78
Physical Description: emerald green eyes, white torso and arms, gold lining, left handed, silver/grey medium length hair
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Unfortunately since you are a Guest account I must deny it rather than placing it on pending, as you are unable to edit the app for the changes required. I highly suggest making a forum account for your next application to avoid this issue.

It seems that your app is lacking a specific reference to server lore, I suggest replacing some of the general locations you mentioned with specific ones you can find on our wiki.

You mention wargs, they do not exist in our canon, but we do have a variety of wolf creatures to reference if you'd like to replace it.

Also, the races you mentioned with special ambiguous powers don't have any of these special powers, they're just the races. Magics must be applied for and obtained separately from this application.

 

If any of the reasons I stated involve the wiki, this link will take you right to the home page, where you can find quick links to the metagaming and power emoting definitions, as well as look around to browse our server lore! WIKI

 

Worry not! This is not the end of the world, and you may re-apply in 6 hours.

 

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command.

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