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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you go beyond certani limits. You do something your character cannot do
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is having your character know something they did not find out in Roleplay. Or attempting to advance your characters progress wihtout putting any work in.

Thalia Valderstal was born in Axious, on the island of Tahn in the Dominion of Malin south of Tahn. Her parents weren't poor but they weren't rich either. Her mother would tell her stories about the fall of Aegis. She' have dreams due to all the stories she'd hear rfom her parents. They were after all there for it. Her mother died at the age of 352, 5 years after her father died at the age of 358. She endured hard labor and copiuos amounts of military training, as it was the Snow elf way. Her fit form provides her with excellent stamina which was needed when others in her neighborhood would bully her and chase her. Due to the hate crimes towards snow elves her parents taught her how to fight and win. She was taught how to hunt, skin, and gut animals. Thalia was a smart and clever girl, but had trouble with stubornness. It often would lead her to fights and those fights would give her scars. She has a cople of scars on her arms and legs from the clawing and cuts the fights would give her. She's tough and subborn and yet spends most of her time outside rreading. 

Character Name: Thalia Valderstal
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Thick, silky, white hair, with pale skin. She is 5'9 and fit. Her eyes are the color of amethysts, she has high cheek bones and sharp features.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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-I would like to start off and note that your application would have been put on pending, though given you posted your application with a guest account you're unable to edit your application, and such putting you on pending would grant you no benefit.

 

-Your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions are switched around- and are a fair bit off. Take  some time to read the definitions linked ont he top of the 'add new application' page as to orient yourself better with them.

 

-Your application is strewn with typos and errors. Take some time to proofread your next application in the future.

 

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

 

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