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BrokenPeep


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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: No using out of player knowledge like if you know something in reallife but not in the game then you must act as if you dont know it in the game
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: To demand something from another play and not giving them a decision on what happens like Timmy bit off jeffs middle finger
    Status: Denied

A female human mercenary, thief, smuggler of illegal trades, and a guard for hire. I am very fast and if I cant fight my way out of a situation i will most likely run out of it. I can climb trees very well and am large so can hide in smaller places. I am a very well ranged weapons and one handed swords. It takes a while for me to gain peoples trust but for most people am very well trusted. People don't usually know about my crimes but when they do find out they are put down and never seen again. My origin is not talked about and known by no one. I am a pretty mysterious person in general.


Character Name: Auria
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: A red headed female in white and red clothing, and a sword drawn always.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Upon review, your application has been Denied. Do not fear, it's not permanent. You can reapply at your leisure. Before doing so I would like to recommend two things to you. First, I suggest registering an account with our forums. As it stands, you are unable to make edits to posts which would make the application process a bit easier for both of us. Second, slow it down a bit. I understand you're excited to play. We're excited to have you, but don't rush things for the sake of getting accepted. A quality application with no mistakes will get you accepted before anything else. If you need any assistance, don't be afraid to ask for help; we the Application Team are here for you. With that being said, below you'll find the necessary changes that must be made in order to be accepted:

  • Your definition for metagaming is a bit jumbled and confusing to read. Just take another look at the rules or wiki for me, re-familiarize yourself and rephrase it so I know you've got it.
  • You background should not solely describe what your character is like. I need you to write up a proper backstory for her. I understand you want an air of mystery about the character, but very few people are going to read this. And those who do and use the information are metagaming.
  • Try to define what your character looks like a bit more for me in the character description. I'd like to be able to vividly imagine them from your words alone.
  • Your Interesting Facts section also requires one fault to provide depth and a weakness for your character.
  • Now, you can't be denied for this, but it looks like you're just using an Asuna skin from SAO. I suggest changing it up either before or after getting accepted.

I recommend taking a look at our wiki as well as the LotC New Player Discord. Both will provide you with what you desire in order to get accepted.

 

LotC Wiki: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/

 

LotC Rules: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/forum/440-rules/

 

LotC New Player Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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